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Loving Kiss

Quiet as a mouse tip toeing to the shower washed, dressed, now ready her cheek, a loving kiss left looking back, tanned beauty sleeps 31/03/15

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:37:00 PM

Awesome win James, always & forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 4/18/2015 12:19:00 PM

James:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2015 12:02:00 AM

this is so sweet. congrats for your win, James.

James Fraser
Date: 4/10/2015 3:01:00 PM

Thank you kindly Andrea, always appreciated. Joyous weekend to you, James :)

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/8/2015 7:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Great write.

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Tammy for gracing my pages, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/8/2015 12:56:00 AM

HUGE CONGRATULATIONS James.. HUGE CLAPS for you from my little hands.. :D:D!!!!!!! /olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 1:49:00 PM

Thank you little one, I love your little hands in mine, always, warm hugs always // Dino James // xxxx

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/7/2015 6:15:00 PM

Ahhh........so romantic is this !!! Hi James, so nice to see one of your wonderful poems !! Congratulations!

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 1:44:00 PM

Hiya Carrie, it's lovely to see you here. One day soon I'll live this Tanka, hence why it was written. A blessed evening to you and yours, hugs, James :) :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 4/7/2015 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations, James, on the winning placement.

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Faye, I'm smiling, James :) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2015 5:07:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 1:35:00 PM

Thanks Sara, always appreciated, James :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2015 4:49:00 PM

James, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7 you put a smile on my face :) . Blessings Eve

James Fraser
Date: 4/9/2015 12:45:00 PM

Thank you kindly Eve, very much appreciated, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:59:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/7/2015 1:22:00 PM

Thank you kindly Jan. Big smiles this evening as I quite like this Tanka for various reasons, hugs //James//xx

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/7/2015 10:28:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win, James! Hugs, Kimberly

James Fraser
Date: 4/7/2015 1:26:00 PM

Thank you Kimberly, nice to see you back at my pages, hugs, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/1/2015 5:44:00 AM

the first line drew a smile on my cheeks.. :) its cute and sweet one.. :)! weeee.. :)Dino James, hugs!//olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 1:19:00 PM

Thought you might like that line Oliz. As I look back, what a beautiful sight, to be witnessed many a morn, when a new dawns born, hugs //xx//your Dino James xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/31/2015 10:41:00 PM

Quite a passionate one James! Great tanka!

James Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Upma, always appreciated, James :)

James Peranteau

Date: 3/31/2015 4:57:00 PM

Off to work dear poet ! Sweet passion in this write my friend ! I just love the way a poet can make one feel even temperature in a write....Great Tanka james, Have a blessed week.............much love, james

James Peranteau
Date: 3/31/2015 5:08:00 PM

....back at ya james !

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 5:05:00 PM

Hey James, no working too hard, me, it's nearly pillow time. Have a blessed week also. It's always a pleasure seeing you here my favourite Bard, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2015 4:56:00 PM

oh how romantic James - beautiful imagery:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/31/2015 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Jan :) A little thought that graced my eyes, as I look back, there she lies, hugs//James xx