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Loving Kiss


Quiet as a mouse
tip toeing to the shower 
washed, dressed, now ready
her cheek, a loving kiss left
looking back, tanned beauty sleeps




31/03/15

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Poet Destroyer A

April 18, 2015 at 2:37 PM

Awesome win James, always & forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

April 18, 2015 at 12:19 PM

James:) Congratulations, on your awesome Tanka win. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2015 at 12:02 AM

this is so sweet. congrats for your win, James.

James Fraser

April 10, 2015 at 3:01 PM

Thank you kindly Andrea, always appreciated. Joyous weekend to you, James :)

Tammy Reams

April 8, 2015 at 7:40 PM

Congrats on your win! Great write.

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:53 PM

Thank you Tammy for gracing my pages, smiles, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 8, 2015 at 12:56 AM

HUGE CONGRATULATIONS James.. HUGE CLAPS for you from my little hands.. :D:D!!!!!!! /olive eloisa

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:49 PM

Thank you little one, I love your little hands in mine, always, warm hugs always // Dino James // xxxx

Carrie Richards

April 7, 2015 at 6:15 PM

Ahhh........so romantic is this !!! Hi James, so nice to see one of your wonderful poems !! Congratulations!

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:44 PM

Hiya Carrie, it's lovely to see you here. One day soon I'll live this Tanka, hence why it was written. A blessed evening to you and yours, hugs, James :) :)

Faye Gibson

April 7, 2015 at 6:07 PM

Congratulations, James, on the winning placement.

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:39 PM

Thank you so much Faye, I'm smiling, James :) :)

Sara Kendrick

April 7, 2015 at 5:07 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Sara

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 1:35 PM

Thanks Sara, always appreciated, James :)

Eve Roper

April 7, 2015 at 4:49 PM

James, congratulations on this descriptive tanka win and a 7 you put a smile on my face :) . Blessings Eve

James Fraser

April 9, 2015 at 12:45 PM

Thank you kindly Eve, very much appreciated, James :) :)

Jan Allison

April 7, 2015 at 11:59 AM

dropping back with my congrats James:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

April 7, 2015 at 1:22 PM

Thank you kindly Jan. Big smiles this evening as I quite like this Tanka for various reasons, hugs //James//xx

Kim Shaw

April 7, 2015 at 10:28 AM

Congrats on a fine win, James! Hugs, Kimberly

James Fraser

April 7, 2015 at 1:26 PM

Thank you Kimberly, nice to see you back at my pages, hugs, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 1, 2015 at 5:44 AM

the first line drew a smile on my cheeks.. :) its cute and sweet one.. :)! weeee.. :)Dino James, hugs!//olive eloisa

James Fraser

April 2, 2015 at 1:19 PM

Thought you might like that line Oliz. As I look back, what a beautiful sight, to be witnessed many a morn, when a new dawns born, hugs //xx//your Dino James xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

March 31, 2015 at 10:41 PM

Quite a passionate one James! Great tanka!

James Fraser

April 2, 2015 at 1:15 PM

Thank you Upma, always appreciated, James :)

James Peranteau

March 31, 2015 at 4:57 PM

Off to work dear poet ! Sweet passion in this write my friend ! I just love the way a poet can make one feel even temperature in a write....Great Tanka james, Have a blessed week.............much love, james

James Peranteau

March 31, 2015 at 5:08 PM

....back at ya james !

James Fraser

March 31, 2015 at 5:05 PM

Hey James, no working too hard, me, it's nearly pillow time. Have a blessed week also. It's always a pleasure seeing you here my favourite Bard, James :) :)