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The bond and love 'tween a father and children, so special :)

Loving Father

Loving   
Generously I give love, lovingly I receive love, I'm  am honest and I am loyal 
Daughter, son, grandson, daddy loves you all...so so much! 
Your smiles, happiness, and love bring great joy to me 
Your downfalls, demises, and deaths...I weep 
I fear the devil does not grasp hold, I fear his voice, I fear his evil 
In the name of the father, the son, and the holy ghost 
My children of heaven...may your days be filled with sunshine
Father 


Writing Challenge2 Bio Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart 
1/27/2019
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La France Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 11:32 PM
Charlie, congratulations on your win in my Bio contest ~
Y. Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Hi Charlie, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:')Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Your children are blessed to bave you as a father. I feel the same way about my children and g.children. I enjoyed your beautiful bio. Congratulations on having it honored in first place! xxoo
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:18 PM
I love your unique style in this form. I was afraid to deviate from Dear Heart's model though I believe you did this correctly from what I read about the form. This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. thanks also, while I am here, for my win in your last contest
Y. Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Hi Charlie, Your bio (pen ) from the heart touched me deeply. It made me think of my own father. I brought tears to my eyes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis
Krutsinger Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 1:50 PM
Such a gorgeous tribute, a heavenly write, Charles, truly.
Messina Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thank you, Caren :) I'm not sure if I did this right, I never wrote a poem in this form before, we'll see (lol) Have a nice Sunday.
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