Loving Father

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The bond and love 'tween a father and children, so special :)

Loving Generously I give love, lovingly I receive love, I'm am honest and I am loyal Daughter, son, grandson, daddy loves you all...so so much! Your smiles, happiness, and love bring great joy to me Your downfalls, demises, and deaths...I weep I fear the devil does not grasp hold, I fear his voice, I fear his evil In the name of the father, the son, and the holy ghost My children of heaven...may your days be filled with sunshine Father Writing Challenge2 Bio Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by Dear Heart 1/27/2019

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Constance La France

Date: 2/5/2019 11:32:00 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your win in my Bio contest ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/5/2019 6:44:00 AM

Hi Charlie, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:')Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2019 5:09:00 PM

Your children are blessed to bave you as a father. I feel the same way about my children and g.children. I enjoyed your beautiful bio. Congratulations on having it honored in first place! xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 4:18:00 PM

I love your unique style in this form. I was afraid to deviate from Dear Heart's model though I believe you did this correctly from what I read about the form. This is such a beautiful tribute to your father. thanks also, while I am here, for my win in your last contest

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2019 3:22:00 PM

Hi Charlie, Your bio (pen ) from the heart touched me deeply. It made me think of my own father. I brought tears to my eyes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/27/2019 1:50:00 PM

Such a gorgeous tribute, a heavenly write, Charles, truly.

Charles Messina
Date: 1/27/2019 1:51:00 PM

Thank you, Caren :) I'm not sure if I did this right, I never wrote a poem in this form before, we'll see (lol) Have a nice Sunday.