Loving Daughter

LOVING DAUGHTER

You are such a sweetheart, showing, giving
all your loving and caring.
Blessed and proud Mom, I am. 


9/4/21 - Written
             Kimo Form Old or New Poetry
             Constance La France

Used:     How Many Syllables (10-7-6)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Evans Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 10:16 PM
Thanks so much Constance. What are you doing up so late. Have a good night. Hugs- Marilene
May Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Lovely write, Congrats on your win
Evans Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Thanks so much Joseph. Have a great day.
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Congrats on this loving winner. Way to go. Sara
Evans Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Thanks, Sara. Have a great day.
Agustin Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 4:33 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Evans Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, Beata. Have a Blessed day.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations!
Evans Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Thank you so much. Enjoy your Labor day, kick back and relax.
Y. Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Hi Marilene, This is such lovely and touching write. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:28 PM
Thanks much, Alexis! I am so so overwhelmed with happiness. I just flew to San Francisco to see the play Hamilton, which my daughter reserved and paid for me and now I just knew she is throwing me a surprised birthday party next month (venue, food and music). I guess, its not a surprise anymore. So I wrote the poem for her. Have a good night.
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 8:30 PM
very sweet, Congrats, Marilene. And thanks for the greetings at the blog
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 8:08 AM
thanks, Marilene
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:21 PM
Thank you, Andrea. So, you were born on Labor Day... You can continue celebrating tomorrow. Have fun.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 3:45 PM
aww such a touching piece Marilene, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 10:20 PM
Thanks, Jan. She is really an amazing daughter. Have a good night or a great day.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:12 AM
Yes, you are!
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Thanks, Kim. Have a great long week-end.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Your daughter is blessed with a great mom too, as you are blessed with a caring daughter. Beautiful Kimo Poem, Marilene. BW~ Mala
Evans Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Thanks, Mala. She always surprise me. She is also a very caring mother to her children. Have a Blessed Sunday.
DiMino Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 2:30 PM
She sounds like a delightful child. And nothing more important than for a parent to let a child know just how dear she is -- this poem an eloquent example. Blessings.
Evans Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Thanks so much, Joe. She is! I'm very thankful. Have a great week-end.
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