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Loving Daughter

LOVING DAUGHTER You are such a sweetheart, showing, giving all your loving and caring. Blessed and proud Mom, I am. 9/4/21 - Written Kimo Form Old or New Poetry Constance La France Used: How Many Syllables (10-7-6)

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Date: 9/8/2021 9:08:00 PM
Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/8/2021 10:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance. What are you doing up so late. Have a good night. Hugs- Marilene
Date: 9/7/2021 10:36:00 AM
Lovely write, Congrats on your win
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/7/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph. Have a great day.
Date: 9/7/2021 5:32:00 AM
Congrats on this loving winner. Way to go. Sara
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/7/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Sara. Have a great day.
Date: 9/7/2021 4:33:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/7/2021 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. Have a Blessed day.
Date: 9/6/2021 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/6/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thank you so much. Enjoy your Labor day, kick back and relax.
Date: 9/5/2021 9:43:00 PM
Hi Marilene, This is such lovely and touching write. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/5/2021 10:28:00 PM
Thanks much, Alexis! I am so so overwhelmed with happiness. I just flew to San Francisco to see the play Hamilton, which my daughter reserved and paid for me and now I just knew she is throwing me a surprised birthday party next month (venue, food and music). I guess, its not a surprise anymore. So I wrote the poem for her. Have a good night.
Date: 9/5/2021 8:30:00 PM
very sweet, Congrats, Marilene. And thanks for the greetings at the blog
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2021 8:08:00 AM
thanks, Marilene
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/5/2021 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. So, you were born on Labor Day... You can continue celebrating tomorrow. Have fun.
Date: 9/5/2021 3:45:00 PM
aww such a touching piece Marilene, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/5/2021 10:20:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. She is really an amazing daughter. Have a good night or a great day.
Date: 9/5/2021 5:12:00 AM
Yes, you are!
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/5/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Have a great long week-end.
Date: 9/5/2021 5:07:00 AM
Your daughter is blessed with a great mom too, as you are blessed with a caring daughter. Beautiful Kimo Poem, Marilene. BW~ Mala
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/5/2021 9:26:00 AM
Thanks, Mala. She always surprise me. She is also a very caring mother to her children. Have a Blessed Sunday.
Date: 9/4/2021 2:30:00 PM
She sounds like a delightful child. And nothing more important than for a parent to let a child know just how dear she is -- this poem an eloquent example. Blessings.
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Marilene Evans
Date: 9/4/2021 2:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joe. She is! I'm very thankful. Have a great week-end.

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