Loving

A generous heart
unveils a reverent care
freed from vanity.
Uniquely the valiant knights
with persistence attain Love.

August 5th, 2018
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Proxenos Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 11:05 PM
My dear Besma, you have a giving generous, caring heart, and this is absolutely evident in each and every poem and comment you pen! I've missed you where are you! Love and poetry wishes coming your way dearest soul sister. Jennifer.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 4:06 PM
You bring an immense beauty and elation to my heart with your beautiful and sincere words dearest Jennifer.. I'm deeply grateful to you for your genuine care and interest in my humble poetry.. always a great pleasure to see you on my page.. you honour my work, soul sister.. warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:45 PM
A generous heart is willing to give without expecting anything in return, but it turns out that it will receive much love and appreciation when the right time arrives. Such a heart is worthy of 'fighting' for! Your words are undoubtedly a reflection of your generous character, Besma! Warm regards // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Indeed, that's my faith.. I do what I believe in.. Giving is an act of love and faith.. I'm so touched by your heartfelt and generous feedback Paul.. Thank you so much for being so kind and encouraging. Deeply humbled and elated. My deepest regards. Be blessed.
Vaso Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:26 AM
Anyone can write of love, anyone can write a poem now and then, no one though can write verse as you do, I feel its from your very heart, there is a kindness, a humanity, a humility, and more so I have seen actions that match such words, you, are may I say a knight of poetry!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 1:46 AM
So much on my humble write Arthur! I run out of words in front of so kind and generous a feedback! Only a soul of such traits can capture what I try to convey.. Thank you so much for your honorable visit and your rewarding comment. My immense pleasure. Be blessed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 8:47 PM
Hello Besma Riasma Dziri,yes your poem is loving. ha.ve a nice evening my friend. Bless you.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Thank you my friend. Be Blessed to. Have a nice evening my friend.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much dear Darlene. I appreciate your visit, reading and lovely feedback. Be blessed.
Sathasivam Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Excellent poem of love and aspirations. You have penned beautifully. Thanks for sharing it.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you so much Ravi for reading and appreciating my write. My honour and delight. Be blessed.
Warrior Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Beautifully written my friend...and yes persistence...I'm still at it lol...a FAV Besma...love & persistence...^WW^
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Thank you so much Winged Warrior for your generous and cheerful feedback and FAV! I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Be blessed.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Love in all its expressions is blessed by God thus forever is praised ! An outstanding Tanka dear , Besna! Happy to see you back! Bless you!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 3:42 AM
Reading and appreciating my write exceeds the delight when writing a work of art! Thank you so much dear Demetrios for granting me that pleasure and honour! Be blessed.
Ashley Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Dear Besma, you depict loving emotions so beautifully.. it takes a truly courageous heart to persist in attaining love, to be generous, to be free from vanity and insecurities so as to be capable of caring for another's heart and feelings.. A rich, deep and meaningful poem for your ardent reader from a poet whose heart is generous in beauty, kindness, love and courage.. a brilliant write my dear and lovely friend.. Love and hugs to you always.. ~Susan
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:13 AM
I'm honoured and blessed to have you a special human named woman, a poetess of high calibre as a dear friend and as an ardent reader. Thank you so much dear Susan for your precious words ! A great pleasure reading the voice of your heart. Hugs and love. Be blessed.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 2:10 AM
An avid reader of abundance.. opening wide a heart to read a creation of my passion, heart and mind.. Insightful, warm-hearted, adept as you are dear Susan, you pierce deep into the words, you stretch your knowledgeable beauty, your abundant fine feelings and grasp every single beat of my heart and every ounce of my thoughts!
Pandit Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:51 PM
A poem of love and aspirations..delightfully depicted by a true artist and a generous heart. Well done, Besma.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 4:47 PM
So kind of you dear Vijay to shower upon my humble write and soul so appreciative, uplifting and precious words. It means a lot to me. Thank you so much. Be blessed.
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