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Lovesick Blues

O Lord, why have you designed for every malady a medicine, For every wound, a balm leaving only love incurable? This melancholy dusk this smothering loneliness and my mournful heart pining for my beloved in this godforsaken milieu. If not to appease my yearning heart My love, can you but come to soothe this moaning moon and lo, to console these teary stars? Oh, for heaven’s sake, do come to enliven this woebegone skyline. When a gust of wind sweeps by the rustling of the fallen leaves startles me and I begin to wonder... Did you just pass me by? ~09/06/18 ~For John Hamilton's Best Free Verse July 1 - Oct. 1, 2018 contest. ~Brian Strand's 115 contest

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Date: 10/4/2018 9:24:00 PM
It is a pleasure for me to return again to offer my heartfelt congratulations to you, Abdul, for another wonderful win with your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:45:00 AM
So well done Abdul, nice to see your name on my list again, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 9/8/2018 6:16:00 PM
Well penned, Abdul. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/7/2018 12:59:00 PM
Returning with enthusiastic congratulations on your excellent win, Abdul, for your exquisite poem of lost love and mournful heartache. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/6/2018 9:51:00 PM
The exquisite beauty of your emotions of lost love longing leaves me breathless. Your wondrous woeful imagery, especially in the third stanza, touches my heart deeply and your expressive poem stirs the depths of my soul, Abdul, culminating with your last four lines that brought tender tears to my eyes. It was such a pleasure to fill my heart with your shining verses this evening. Inspired and gorgeous in every way.. A FAV! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Abdul Malik
Date: 9/7/2018 11:06:00 AM
Wow, I love your comment better than my poem! lol. Appreciate much, Susan.

Book: Shattered Sighs