Love-Sick

Covered with sickness , Lonely dawn . can't fall asleep , Waiting by the phone . I am captivated , With those twinkling stars . My imagination is traveling , From Earth to Mars . Gloriously vanishing days , I remember so . When I say I love you , And you said the same too . Laying in my bed , Waving my hands up . I don't know what's happening , It makes my head pop . I decided to forget , What you promised me last . Looking for someone , Who can make my ruined memories cast . Neil Dinoy -
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February 26, 2012 at 5:07 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Touched" contest Neil. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2012 at 12:21 PM
I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Neil. Love, Carol
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February 23, 2012 at 3:41 AM
Neil, LOVE has no perfect recipe,sometimes I wish it was. - good luck my friend - in love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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