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Love's Window

When one door is closed,
Young love may go through some stages,
While window is open.


Haiga for Edward Hopper's painting Summer Evening

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 24, 2009 at 5:04 AM

Congratulations, Martin, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this insightful poem. Smiles, Dane Ann

October 23, 2009 at 1:54 PM

Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Brandee Augustus

October 19, 2009 at 1:04 PM

Congratulations on your honourable mention in Brian's Imaging contest.

Robin L. Gass

October 19, 2009 at 7:21 AM

This is wonderful, Marty! Congratulations on your win in Brians' contest! Love, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 18, 2009 at 6:26 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Martin. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

October 18, 2009 at 1:15 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Martin.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.

Cecil Hickman

October 13, 2009 at 10:16 PM

an interesting take from the painting and great use of words for the vision,,wishing you the best of luck and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words.,,,Blessings Cecil

Doris Culverhouse

October 11, 2009 at 7:08 PM

I felt that they weren't in love when I loooked at that painting, they seemed tense. LOL

Barbara Gorelick

October 11, 2009 at 11:03 AM

Wow, you thought of something..great. This one has me stumped. BG

P Sheart

October 11, 2009 at 7:05 AM

So true to life Marty. Good luck in contest! Love Light Truth Patty

Corinne Curcio

October 11, 2009 at 4:30 AM

Good luck in the contest Martin. A thought provoking poem.

Lynette Chachere

October 11, 2009 at 3:47 AM

many people can relate to this<: it reminds me of something. when your heart is closed, and you lose faith of it opening back up to a new love, thats when you discover, theres always someone that has that key.

Brian Strand

October 11, 2009 at 12:43 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Martin.Rgds Brian

Carolyn Devonshire

October 10, 2009 at 10:30 PM

Mr. Hopper's works are receiving a lot of attention. I'll have to check out this painting. It sounds like a good description of love's transitional stages. Very enjoyable senryu Marti! Love, Carolyn

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