Love's Window

When one door is closed,
Young love may go through some stages,
While window is open.


Haiga for Edward Hopper's painting Summer Evening

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/24/2009 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Martin, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest with this insightful poem. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/23/2009 1:54:00 PM
Much said in just three lines. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your honourable mention in Brian's Imaging contest.
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Date: 10/19/2009 7:21:00 AM
This is wonderful, Marty! Congratulations on your win in Brians' contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Martin. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:15:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Martin.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open.
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Date: 10/13/2009 10:16:00 PM
an interesting take from the painting and great use of words for the vision,,wishing you the best of luck and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words.,,,Blessings Cecil
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:08:00 PM
I felt that they weren't in love when I loooked at that painting, they seemed tense. LOL
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Date: 10/11/2009 11:03:00 AM
Wow, you thought of something..great. This one has me stumped. BG
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Date: 10/11/2009 7:05:00 AM
So true to life Marty. Good luck in contest! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/11/2009 4:30:00 AM
Good luck in the contest Martin. A thought provoking poem.
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Date: 10/11/2009 3:47:00 AM
many people can relate to this<: it reminds me of something. when your heart is closed, and you lose faith of it opening back up to a new love, thats when you discover, theres always someone that has that key.
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Date: 10/11/2009 12:43:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Martin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/10/2009 10:30:00 PM
Mr. Hopper's works are receiving a lot of attention. I'll have to check out this painting. It sounds like a good description of love's transitional stages. Very enjoyable senryu Marti! Love, Carolyn
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