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This is my first shot at writing a Ballade.  I find it a poetic gymnastic event.  Many twists and turns in hope the judges don't sense your fear.

Love’s Wave and Breaking Crest


And though the lover’s now shared empty cells
o’erflowing with the enmity of loss
endured the curse of self inflicted hells
beneath the towered specter of the cross
the remnants of a love – now prayerful dross
crumbling – dry flowers clutched to chest
unwilling to admit denials cost
beneath fate’s wave and breaking crest.

A darkness of the heart devoid of light
numbing to the  core all pulsing hope
adrift in string-less voyage – hateful flight
as fearful fingers ever slowly grope
the promise of the knotted, swinging rope
to which the aching heart has acquiesced
in effort to relieve love’s need to cope
beneath fate’s wave and breaking crest.

As through love’s hand slid harsh Manilla grip
tears dried upon a sallow, sunken cheek
awakening cold heart from endless trip
silencing the quest for dying’s shriek
recoiling from a final act so bleak
as to despoil a love that felt so blessed
strip it of love’s whimsical mystique
beneath fate’s wave and breaking crest.

Thus does the heart renew its rhythmic pace
return full beating flow to aching chest
release itself from memory’s sad embrace
beneath love’s wave and breaking crest.


//rhyme scheme not carried throughout//
//each stanza has own rhyme// 


4/28/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/9/2015 8:35:00 PM
Nice too see you on top John... PD
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 5/9/2015 6:59:00 PM
Huge congrats John on this fine win! Smooth, deep and so well written! A7....
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:15:00 AM
Thanks for the high marks and kind words Robert
Date: 5/9/2015 5:54:00 PM
John, congratulations LOVE SKAT :)
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:14:00 AM
thanks SKAT
Date: 5/9/2015 2:11:00 PM
Congrats John.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Rob
Date: 5/9/2015 10:05:00 AM
I see I wasn't the only one, who was a novice at writing a ballade ! All I can say, is that you have a gift, regardless of the difficulty or challenge....you knocked this one out of the park !! Hooray, John....this is wonderful...reads like a poem from the classics ! Congratulations !
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:14:00 AM
Hey Carrie, I'm almost old enough to be considered a "classic". Thanks for your kind words of support.
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