Andrea Dietrich Poet Etheree

Love's Scent For Twin Flames Contest

Two
candles
melt away
fragrantly as
twin flames above them
mirror one another
in a bright dance of passion.
The wax bodies fade away, but
love’s scent beautifully lingers as
the steadfast flames burn slowly down to die.

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Daver Austin March 19, 2016 at 10:02 AM This reminds me of a poem I posted today - the colors and scent of love. More love, daver

Skat A March 19, 2016 at 12:58 AM Andrea, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Vladislav Raven March 15, 2016 at 7:18 PM Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful write Andrea. Sometimes the greatest beauty can come through simplicity itself. Love's scent lingers and the two flames therefore can never die. This etheree has to be a seven Andrea....Vlad.

Dineen Williams Gault March 15, 2016 at 9:49 AM This was a delightful gift to the senses. Much enjoyed! Congratulations!

Timothy Hicks March 13, 2016 at 9:20 PM The physical fading, but the emotions remaining. Back again to say congrats on your winning verse, Andrea.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 13, 2016 at 2:55 PM Congratulations Andrea on the placement of the contest

Charlie Smith March 13, 2016 at 2:29 PM Lovely work, deserving celebration Andrea

Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 12:36 PM Lovely etheree Andrea,congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Harry Horsman March 10, 2016 at 4:50 PM Love the form and the shape, of this, and of course the words that construct it..

Joseph May March 9, 2016 at 8:05 PM Very nice etheree Andrea...best wishes

Bl Devnath March 9, 2016 at 12:46 PM Love's scent beautifully lingers.... an excellent imagery with beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend, bl

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2016 at 7:44 AM you fire this up with wonderful imagery, andie... very nice; huggs!

Eileen Manassian March 9, 2016 at 4:45 AM I love scented candles, Andrea....and passion? Well, what can I say? This is lovely, dear. Wish you all the best in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2016 at 4:13 AM - Flames are fascinating - A wonderful poem, Andrea - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong March 9, 2016 at 1:24 AM This is really lovely Andrea. Both your poem and the form. G L in the contest.

Hija De La Luna March 9, 2016 at 12:14 AM I love the imagery used here, Andrea! It evokes more than what is there..it lingers.

Laura Leiser March 8, 2016 at 11:59 PM Love this poetic form and your images and descriptive words are perfect! Good luck, Andrea :)

Timothy Hicks March 8, 2016 at 11:20 PM A love so fleeting in the image of a candle melting to a stub. Quite vivid ... I enjoyed the lingering scent.

Eve Roper March 8, 2016 at 11:12 PM Great verse the image you left in my mind beautiful!