Loves Refrain

The tree bears our names

Deep are the initials carved

A heart and arrow

Forever it will remain

So long after loves refrain...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/1/2011 7:59:00 AM
I had to laugh at my self for I thought oh 3 bears and then I read it again and got the message. A little slow on the uptake this morning Shar ha ha. Yes, those will remain for the lifetime of the tree and what a memory it will leave. love phyl
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Date: 3/1/2011 3:37:00 AM
Aw this is so sweet! Really liked it..love,Deb
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:08:00 PM
smile -- i had to read your beauties opening verse twice my dear wondering if it were three bears or tree bears??? yet, the beautiful message is wonderfully clear that yes, true love shall forevermore transcend all of time ~ i could feel your lovely heart amid these soft pastles; sooo very beautiful ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:26:00 PM
One of the better tanka poems I have seen since I first entered this site a little over two months ago.
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:26:00 PM
very thoughtful expressions with analogy, Sharon
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