Love's Quest

Oh fear not! Honey, let's quickly unite To explore spark at night. Screams of fun and cheers will thrill soft ears Oh fear not! You are "Mine" Light is blocking our sight Honey, let's quickly unite Painted face blush, colorful heat waves rush To explore spark at night. 12, June 2024 Contest- Any theme-12 lines poetry contest Sponsored by-JOSEPH MAY

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/18/2024 10:39:00 AM

Hello V. Deerpa, this poem sounds to me to be romantic. Hugs. /Darlene/

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/7/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Joseph May

Date: 6/21/2024 3:55:00 PM

Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win

Mat Ignacio

Date: 6/12/2024 8:27:00 PM

i like the phrasings and flow of this -