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Flames devouring her breast betwixt these fangs as

She cried; virginistic blood, dripping unto the floor....

Quivering for more whileas she squeezed times thighs

To release it's joy; her craving piercing nails; bitten

Carvings of this night; screaming at the silent moon

Ravishing her still framed flesh; in euphoric crimsons....

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...."Loves Notes" *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/9/2012 8:26:00 PM
Wow! That was intense! Awesome one. Thanks for the kind comments on my work - always uplifting as usual. Thanks. (: Your friend, Laura
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Date: 4/30/2012 9:17:00 AM
Dear John: Love this! Janice
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Date: 5/17/2012 1:52:00 PM
...."Thank You, 'My Sweeet Beautiful Janice.'" *

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