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Loves Mystical Fable

A rising sun sheds light, Bright from darkness. To you I turn, our eyes meet for the first time today. Inspiring, tempting, I want to ravage you. Reveal your mysteries, talk to you, a conversation. Enter your mind, a vocal form of four-play Remember the night we met? that play I took you to see Rent, your blue eyes shone bright. We walked, talked, drank coffee. You opened your mind to me. Penetrating mine with your baby blue eyes. I was intrigued by your mysterious ways I still am. Everyday your more tempting. You tease me with your unrelenting, seductive, temptation. just by looking your direction you play tricks on me. Everyday I try to unravel your mystery, still I come up empty. I love that your so bright. Intelligence shows through your eyes Another American great mind. I'll be home later, do you mind? My friends are going to the bar, it's tempting. You trust me, I know, it shows through your eyes. We're all going to watch football, drink and play pool. Everyday my love grows brighter for you. that is no mystery Our love is like a mystical fable. A story from a romantic mind. Yes we argue, yes we fight, this brightens, strengthens our bond. Other women force temptation, of course. But, I would never play outside of your watchful eye. Everywhere I go your eyes follow. This is all part of your mystery. I look forward to coming home, the sexual games we play, the conversations that stimulate my mind. I love you, your my temptress, and like the sun, my love will always shine bright. Eyes like Cleopatra, with a beautiful Mind your Mysterious ways, your love, such Temptation fourPlay in conversation. Never dim, always Bright stanza 1.............................................. 1,2,3,4,5,6 stanza 2.............................................. 6,1,5,2,4,3 stanza 3.............................................. 3,6,4,1,2,5 stanza 4.............................................. 5,3,2,6,1,4 stanza 5.............................................. 4,5,1,3,6,2 stanza 6.............................................. 2,4,6,5,3,1 concluding tercet first line............................................... 2 & 5 second line........................................... 4 & 3 third line............................................... 6 & 1 ..........:JP)..............................

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Date: 4/28/2010 5:31:00 PM
yike! and it is not iambic pentameter....so a running rampant romp through a tail tale ending with the same six words all mixed up...sounds like art?
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Date: 7/19/2009 1:11:00 PM
Superbly written piece Jared, it oozes love. Thank you for all your kind comments on my work>>James
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Date: 7/18/2009 8:18:00 PM
I really enjoy the way you feel the attraction immediately on your first date (Rent must have been awesome!). Even more splendid is the fact that you loveher "beautiful mind." We always worry that attraction will fade as the years take their toll on our physical bodies. But the mind, her playful manners, these will keep the attraction growing forever, Jared. Beautiful write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2009 7:38:00 PM
Love and romance, a product of infinite, expanse, excellant write! God bless Moses!
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Date: 7/18/2009 6:40:00 AM
Very alluring reading such love and romance. Keep on writing. One question what is the four? Sara
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Jared Pickett
Date: 2/10/2014 8:56:00 AM
The 4 that repeats is the word "Mystery" in variations. Mysterious, Mystical & Mystery!Asavvy1
Date: 7/18/2009 5:53:00 AM
I LOVE THIS ONE! IT SCREAMS PASSION AND DESIRE!
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