Loves Mystical Fable

A rising sun sheds light, Bright
from darkness. To you I turn, our eyes
meet for the first time today. Inspiring, tempting,
I want to ravage you. Reveal your mysteries,
talk to you, a conversation. Enter your mind,
a vocal form of four-play

Remember the night we met? that play
I took you to see Rent, your blue eyes shone bright.
We walked, talked, drank coffee. You opened your mind
to me. Penetrating mine with your baby blue eyes.
I was intrigued by your mysterious 
ways I still am. Everyday your more tempting.

You tease me with your unrelenting, seductive, temptation.
just by looking your direction you play
tricks on me. Everyday I try to unravel your mystery,
still I come up empty. I love that your so bright.
Intelligence shows through your eyes
Another American great mind.

I'll be home later, do you mind?
My friends are going to the bar, it's tempting.
You trust me, I know, it shows through your eyes.
We're all going to watch football, drink and play
pool. Everyday my love grows brighter
for you. that is no mystery

Our love is like a mystical
fable. A story from a romantic mind.
Yes we argue, yes we fight, this brightens,
strengthens our bond. Other women force temptation,
of course. But, I would never play
outside of your watchful eye.

Everywhere I go your eyes 
follow. This is all part of your mystery.
I look forward to coming home, the sexual games we play,
the conversations that stimulate my mind.
I love you, your my temptress,
and like the sun, my love will always shine bright.

Eyes like Cleopatra, with a beautiful Mind
your Mysterious ways, your love, such Temptation
fourPlay in conversation. Never dim, always Bright


stanza 1.............................................. 1,2,3,4,5,6
stanza 2.............................................. 6,1,5,2,4,3
stanza 3.............................................. 3,6,4,1,2,5
stanza 4.............................................. 5,3,2,6,1,4
stanza 5.............................................. 4,5,1,3,6,2
stanza 6.............................................. 2,4,6,5,3,1
concluding tercet 
first line............................................... 2 & 5
second line........................................... 4 & 3
third line............................................... 6 & 1
..........:JP)..............................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 5:31 PM
yike! and it is not iambic pentameter....so a running rampant romp through a tail tale ending with the same six words all mixed up...sounds like art?
Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Superbly written piece Jared, it oozes love. Thank you for all your kind comments on my work>>James
Devonshire Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 8:18 PM
I really enjoy the way you feel the attraction immediately on your first date (Rent must have been awesome!). Even more splendid is the fact that you loveher "beautiful mind." We always worry that attraction will fade as the years take their toll on our physical bodies. But the mind, her playful manners, these will keep the attraction growing forever, Jared. Beautiful write! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 7:38 PM
Love and romance, a product of infinite, expanse, excellant write! God bless Moses!
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Very alluring reading such love and romance. Keep on writing. One question what is the four? Sara
Pickett Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 8:56 AM
The 4 that repeats is the word "Mystery" in variations. Mysterious, Mystical & Mystery!Asavvy1
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 5:53 AM
I LOVE THIS ONE! IT SCREAMS PASSION AND DESIRE!
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