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Love's Moment

LOVE’S MOMENT trying to think through my mental calendar, the mystic moment i first experienced love simply cannot become clear age realizes that love is a growing process - those tender or firm touches points of awareness happening along the wheel how impossible to single out a moment. age realizes love is a whole bunch of things coming slowly together i’m gone fishing now – how important is one’s need to revelation, yes, the fulfillment of need along life’s bumpy highway? my need is fulfilled the sex companionship is nicely fulfilled how warm and satisfying how wonderful for a while love? yes, of a kind. back to the mystic moment and one’s gratification. growth does slowly define the moment – one comes out of self Dave Austin

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:49:00 AM
Exquisite write, Dave! Loved the wisdom and insight here, a 7!
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Date: 3/12/2016 3:57:00 AM
I agree with you, Dave...love is a growing process. Initially we might think that attraction, sex, etc is what constitutes love, but it is in due time that the real meaning takes shape. ~ All the best...paul
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Date: 3/12/2016 1:34:00 AM
I would think that fishing would be the perfect inspiration to write poetry daver. Great work! ; )
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/12/2016 9:22:00 AM
My fishing is all about introspection, my poetry about communication. Thanks for the read. Love, daver
Date: 3/11/2016 10:43:00 PM
you have waxed so thoughtful , my friend. yes, as Broken Wings has said, this is a deep write on love!
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Date: 3/11/2016 5:11:00 PM
Dave, you have penned a very deep write, love can be many things, wonderful, and I am loving this 7 ~
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