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Love's Mirror

Sky tinged with phosphorescence Moon pale, convalescent Incandescent lunar crescent Adolescent lips meet in acquiescence Hopes blaze, steamy flourescence Hush! thy quiescent quintessence Shy effervescence, her backdrop incalescence Tumescence lurks too, fraught essence In Love's Mirror of Evanescence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/12/2018 1:39:00 PM
Love the flow and meter, coos like a lullaby!
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:14:00 PM
Hey Gershon.. Another day, another airport. So how do I fight the long sit and wait? Your incredible write of course! You made my delay sing!! Come see me if you get a chance.. I'm releasing a secret!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 7:43:00 PM
Well, thank you, my friend! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 7/9/2018 5:40:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! It makes me think of my granddaughter--not dating, but soon will be! Scary times! :-) Janice
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 7:43:00 PM
Thank you, Janice... I've changed the wording a bit to improve the poem...and I don't mean to scare you, but you might find it a bit more perilous in regards to your granddaughter. Best wishes, gw
Date: 7/9/2018 11:18:00 AM
Very cool poem, Gershon. Evanescence, eh. Gotta look that one up. Trip-hop poetry w/such rad lines ... Hopes blaze, steamy fluorescence. Spot-on poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 1:40:00 PM
FRJ, thank you so much for weighing in on this one! ~ Gershon

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