John Lawless Poet Sedoka

Love's Lunacy

Lover’s Lunacy

Ah, togetherness
compressed hearts beating as one
salt water kisses linger.
How can I miss you
wave to you love’s bon voyage
if you will not go away.


8/10/2017

submitted to – Oh how I miss you – poetry contest

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Agnes Krampe August 25, 2017 at 5:36 PM Congrats on your win, John. I like the twist ;)

Gregory Richard Barden August 24, 2017 at 5:47 PM Great stuff, John - congrats, my friend!

Heidi Sands August 24, 2017 at 5:35 PM Congratulations on your win John! :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer August 24, 2017 at 5:24 PM Nice twist on the theme John. A plus for originality!

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2017 at 8:12 PM Lovely one John. The title is awesome! Love the salt water kisses line!

Eve Roper August 10, 2017 at 10:26 AM Nicely done, John, luck in the contest ~*

Dean Wood August 10, 2017 at 9:14 AM hehe, This is funny John! Nice turn there at the end.