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Together, we'd swim the depths of our souls, splashing and playing in love's limpid pools. And we'd adopt each other's hopes and goals, love-struck teenagers and romantic fools. Holding hands, we'd stare at the stars all night, stealing kisses when no one was around. And we'd ogle the sky until first light, watching shooting stars fizzle earthward bound. And we felt we were both blessed somehow, confident our love would last forever. But it didn't; that was then, this is now, and we no longer believe in never. Living is a time capsule in itself, where childish dreams collect dust on a shelf.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/3/2020 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. This is a wonderful sonnet.
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Date: 1/4/2020 9:33:00 AM
Thanks JC, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/3/2020 1:31:00 PM
Congrats on your HM;)
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Date: 1/3/2020 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/2/2020 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/3/2020 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2020 1:57:00 PM
great rhythm and rhyme dear Emile :) Congrats on your win with this amazing sonnet - you never cease to amaze me x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Luloo, your comments have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/1/2020 1:22:00 PM
What a wonderful sonnet, congrats Emile on a shared second place win best sonnet 2019!
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:21:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/27/2019 9:18:00 AM
another great sonnet Emile.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 2:56:00 PM
Just beautiful, Emile. So hmmm, is that you in the picture? One never knows for sure!!
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Date: 1/23/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I wish I was that young again my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 1:15:00 PM
Wow Emile, this is a stunner.
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Date: 1/23/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thanks so much Line, coming from you the comments have twice the impact my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 12:30:00 PM
How tenderly you wrote this Emile, not a bit of sadness, just matter-of-factly, and succinctly. No regret, just the way it is. Nice one for sure! You have certainly tossed this one high into the winner's circle my friend.
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Date: 1/23/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I love your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/23/2019 11:13:00 AM
Ah, sweet, youth is a time capsule indeed. Our memory snug for the fit, as years go by, Thanks for the lovely entry. hope you have a wonderful day Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thanks Pixie, please read my blog my friend, Emile.

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