Love's Limpid Pools

In our youth, we'd swim the depths of our souls, splashing and playing in love's limpid pools. And we would share each other's hopes and goals, love-struck teenagers and romantic fools. Holding hands, we'd stare at the stars all night, stealing kisses when no one was around. And we'd ogle the sky until first light, watching shooting stars streaking earthward bound. Back then, we felt we were both blessed somehow, confident our love would last forever. And yet, it didn't; that was then, this is now, and we no longer believe in never. Memory's a time capsule in itself; where innocence collects dust on youth's shelf.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hawkens Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 3:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement. This is a wonderful sonnet.
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 9:33 AM
Thanks JC, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Chiri Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Congrats on your HM;)
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Congratulations on your win in John Hamilton, Best Sonnet Contest. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:57 PM
great rhythm and rhyme dear Emile :) Congrats on your win with this amazing sonnet - you never cease to amaze me x:-)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Luloo, your comments have brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 1:22 PM
What a wonderful sonnet, congrats Emile on a shared second place win best sonnet 2019!
Pinet Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 9:21 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
One Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:18 AM
another great sonnet Emile.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Pinet Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Thanks Silent One, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Just beautiful, Emile. So hmmm, is that you in the picture? One never knows for sure!!
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Thanks Andrea, I wish I was that young again my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 1:15 PM
Wow Emile, this is a stunner.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Thanks so much Line, coming from you the comments have twice the impact my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 12:30 PM
How tenderly you wrote this Emile, not a bit of sadness, just matter-of-factly, and succinctly. No regret, just the way it is. Nice one for sure! You have certainly tossed this one high into the winner's circle my friend.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thanks Caren, I love your comments my friend, Emile.
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January 23, 2019 at 11:13 AM
Ah, sweet, youth is a time capsule indeed. Our memory snug for the fit, as years go by, Thanks for the lovely entry. hope you have a wonderful day Emile.
Pinet Avatar
January 23, 2019 at 11:26 AM
Thanks Pixie, please read my blog my friend, Emile.
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