Pandita Sietesantos Poet Rhyme

Love's Like That

Love's Like That

My kiss dipped in red wine,
casts its spell now you’re  mine.
We melt as lips tease lips,              
nice and slow, we’ll take sips.
 
On a blue moon we ride,                  
through the sky side by side.
Glide with me in your arms;
woo me with your male charms.

Sing to me like a lark;
let your songs calm the dark.
With dawn’s cool, fresh, night dew  
like a bud, love blooms new. 

It's more than just a kiss,
when love bursts with shared bliss.
This love we feel will grow,
and stay with us we know.
 
Like the fixed stars love beams… 
the kind born in sweet dreams.
Love will rule head and heart; 
this we know from the start.

02-09-2018

Contest:     120 Words
Sponsor:     Silent One
Placement:   2nd

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Anil Deo May 21, 2018 at 8:14 PM I sensed this passionate romance flow like oozing chocolate lava; then I became wary of exploding volcanoes. Maybe it's the news: Paradise gained; Paradise Lost. But I know a Redeemer King, returning for His Bride, per Revelation. Like it Ms.PS Pandita Sietesantos May 22, 2018 at 11:00 AM Love in all its many forms is a wonderful emotion - our love for family, neighbors, country, self, etc. - all emanate from God's supreme love! Well done, Anil! Best regards. Pandita

Freddie Robinson Jr. February 15, 2018 at 4:54 PM Another romantic gem, Pandita. You got your poetic chops laying down a midnight tango rumba beat. Very sensual and sweet. A splendid write this stellar poem be. Love and more love always. Pandita Sietesantos February 15, 2018 at 8:09 PM Awww - you are too sweet; even your compliments are poetic pieces in themselves! Thank you so much for your continued encouragement and support, dear friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Normie Payton February 14, 2018 at 5:28 PM Alright, Pandita. What's up? Pandita Sietesantos February 14, 2018 at 9:39 PM Hey Normie. Thanks for stopping by. I'm doing good. Hope your are too:-)! Best regards. Pandita

Eve Roper February 11, 2018 at 8:24 PM Hello Pandita, congratulations on your winning write very well written ..Enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme to make a have way good poem .. Hugs Eve Pandita Sietesantos February 12, 2018 at 9:00 AM My dear Eve, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me your lovely congratulations and complimentary words! You are so right this was an exceptionally challenging contest! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Eric Boddie February 10, 2018 at 1:15 PM since no one would ever want to hear me sing....i will offer so literary bling....Love is truly a magical thing....so intense, it changes all that you bring....no mistrust, no deception, nothing that stings....just 2 hearts united, one queen, one king....so very Beautiful old friend....how have you been since we last conversed....;) Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 3:19 PM Eric I have been thinking about you! I am well. I hope good things have been happening for you, my friend. I am so thrilled to hear from you with your awesome response to my piece! You're the best! Best wishes and let's continue to keep in touch! Hugs and blessings. Pandita

Susan Ashley February 10, 2018 at 10:42 AM Returning with my delighted congratulations on your excellent win Pandita with your wondrously romantic and sensual poem. Warmest wishes and hugs my friend. ~Susan Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 10:54 AM Susan, thank you so very much for swinging back! I appreciate your lovely compliments and congratulations which are so inspirational! Have a great day, my friend! Pandita

Alexis Y. February 10, 2018 at 10:12 AM Hi Pandita, This is such a beautiful and romantic piece. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. PS, It's good to see you posting again my friend:-) Alexis Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 10:15 AM Hi Alexis, thank you for your congratulations and lovely compliments! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier February 10, 2018 at 10:11 AM Congrats on your win, Pandita. Well done. Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 10:14 AM Thank you, my friend! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Silent One February 10, 2018 at 9:17 AM Romantic and sensual lines Pandita.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest.. ps welcome back.. Pandita Sietesantos February 10, 2018 at 9:49 AM SO thank you so much for the great honour - I am extremely delighted to be placed on your winners' list! Thank you also for your continued encouragement which means so much to me. Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley February 9, 2018 at 12:47 PM Such a passionate and sensuous romantic poem my dear friend Pandita. Lovely lines of love, rhythm and rhymes expressed with luscious imagery. A wondrous write. So great to see you! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Pandita Sietesantos February 9, 2018 at 1:01 PM Thank you, thank you, dear Susan! That means so much to me! I hope you are doing well! Best regards and hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit February 9, 2018 at 10:52 AM Beautifully written and executed verses of love..excellent poem, despite the word constraints! Haven't seen your work in a while Pandita..great to see you in this space. Pandita Sietesantos February 9, 2018 at 11:09 AM Hi Vijay, yes, while it was quite challenging to work with the word constraints, I had a lot of fun. Thank you so much for your compliments and kind support! I definitely try to be around more often:-). Best regards and hugs. Pandita