Winged Warrior Poet Sonnet

Loves Lament

A euphoric emptiness that lasts forever
An eternity trapped in tangled time
Emotions that fly through the nilpotent never
A lasting love with a calamitous climb

Floating memories that sail through space
Where tears are shed and shadows weep
And saddened souls have lost their place
Within the dumpsters of the desolate deep

Mind and matter creating crystalline hells
There demons roam with a restless rule
Where blood turns cold with crusted cells
Slowly salivating with their demonic drool

Can love be found in this cabalistic cave
Or is it laboriously lost but only to enslave.


May.30.2016

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Just James June 6, 2016 at 12:24 AM Loved your sonnet easy 7 Winged Warrior June 6, 2016 at 7:51 AM Thank you James...always nice to have you visit...god bless...^WW^

Phil Capitano June 4, 2016 at 6:27 AM If a lament can be beautiful (and it can) this certainly is. The ending question says it all. Winged Warrior June 4, 2016 at 8:33 AM Thank you my friend...oh the irony lol...god bless...^WW^

Casarah Nance June 3, 2016 at 11:39 AM Great alliterations, vocabulary that ups the bar and a questioning couplet to hang the end with...a fascinating sonnet worth many reads to absorb the words, mood and greatness of it. :) Winged Warrior June 4, 2016 at 8:20 AM Thank you so much Casarah...sometimes just a few words can express a lot...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2016 at 8:25 PM I don't see many sonnets as beautifully written as this one is. VERY nicely done!! Winged Warrior June 2, 2016 at 9:02 PM Thank you Andrea...may you never have to enter this cave lol...god bless...^WW^

Becca Teagan June 2, 2016 at 10:04 AM This is an amazing sonnet, WW... ooh that third stanza is ... whew.. kind of creepy!!! Nice job! Winged Warrior June 2, 2016 at 10:10 AM Thank you Becca...the many heavens and hell's of Love...and we(poets) are hear as reporters...like on the 6 O'clock news lol...god bless...^WW^

Poet Destroyer A May 31, 2016 at 4:41 AM such a drawing read from beginning to end, thank you for sharing.. ... ~Linda~ Winged Warrior May 31, 2016 at 8:33 AM Thank you kindly Linda...as are you a drawing read from beginning to end...you are a unique lady...^WW^

Walter T. Ashe May 30, 2016 at 9:26 PM ^WW^...you have really captured a lament about Love! I read this a couple of times and each one had greater content impact than the previous one! Hoping all is going well for you Sir! Winged Warrior May 30, 2016 at 10:54 PM Thank you Sir Walter...all is calm at the moment...just that sometimes I get reminded and hit in the gut and heart...of why I started writing about poetry in the first place...and thus I (we) write lol...and I hope all is well in your kingdom sir...god bless...^WW^

Tom Quigley May 30, 2016 at 8:00 AM Great write. Evocative of the emptiness. Great pic too. Winged Warrior May 30, 2016 at 10:00 AM Thank you Tom...always nice to hear from you...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong May 30, 2016 at 5:23 AM So true and so eloquently written WW. The fastest way to stop the pain is to meet someone new. Beautifully melancholic. #7 ; ) Winged Warrior May 30, 2016 at 5:30 AM Thank you Connie...love sucks lol...god bless...^WW^