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Love's Hurt

Leaving
Staying
Coming
Going
Love ever leaving a staying heart
is hurt coming from going love's start

emotionsgoodbyeheartbreakhurtlonelinesstyburn

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Charles Messina

August 31, 2019 at 5:49 AM

This is a bit of a tongue twister (lol) A wonderful tyburn CayCay. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Love this one! As always..Poetry hugs :) Charlie

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2019 at 6:19 PM

hey, Caycay, back with my congrats. I think we both placed the same in this one. I can't wait to have the time to see all the winners. I think I have at least five challenges to get to by Sunday . Ay!! wish me luck.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 30, 2019 at 7:53 AM

- Congratulations, CayCay :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster

August 26, 2019 at 2:14 AM

Ouch. I love this. I hate this. I love this. Ouch. Excellent write. Sharp pen indeed. Ann

Andrea Dietrich

August 12, 2019 at 3:39 PM

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Janice Canerdy

August 12, 2019 at 7:17 AM

A moving contrast, CayCay. Janice

Harry Horsman

August 11, 2019 at 4:46 PM

Love ever so complex, you write this so well. love it.

Andrea Dietrich

August 11, 2019 at 1:13 PM

I love the interesting way you did line three, Caycay. that contrast of leaving with staying!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 11, 2019 at 11:35 AM

- So true, CayCay ... very well written :) - Good luck in the contest :) - I was a bit "bitten" by "Tyburn fever" ... couldn't stop with just one ... I wrote three :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

August 11, 2019 at 3:45 AM

I'd never thought of it in that light CaCay, so insightful are your lines! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

August 11, 2019 at 1:51 AM

A deep though provoking write my dear friend - really enjoyed and wish you all the best in the contest - my magic ball has spotted a win! Love and hugs, Jenny.

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