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Loves Grip-Collab

With a whispering sigh, I feel your kiss caress my lips My heart begins to race, as I place my hands on your hips Longingly my body craves, the gentle touching of your fingertips Touch me here, touch me there, Moaning softly I feel your hands begin to slip Across my neck and down my back, Enjoying the frenzy as our clothes rip Onto the bed we slowly lay, You the ocean, and I the ship Beads of passion begin to cascade, As we are joined together on this climactic trip Our quickened hearts both beat as one, Infused together in loves most fierce grip
An arousingly poetic collab with the one and only Germaine Pasley ;)) 6/16/12

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Date: 12/11/2013 12:02:00 AM
Great collab. You guys worked very well, like the ocean and a ship. ; ) Amazing words and passionate pen. Awesome job to both of you! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/26/2012 2:45:00 PM
Very passionately penned, loved it, blessings,Carl
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:35:00 AM
how you like my Grandsons opinion on MeeMaw kissin anyone but him.
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:30:00 AM
marriage must be a true blessing. fraid I'm too old to start that stuff now hahaha. Missed you Dan, hope you and Yours are doing well as well as the family, becareful, writes like this, you could get a new addition ;) ya just never know. :)
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Date: 6/19/2012 8:47:00 PM
I never cease to be amazed Dan, you take us places no one would want to miss. A steamy write that gyrates in so many different directions! Keep on, I'll never get tired! Love, Lizzie
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Date: 6/19/2012 4:26:00 PM
Dan, wow..... it's like reading a TNT..poem... kaboom... i love the fiery grip... a wonderful collaboration,,,pd
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 8:03:00 PM
lol...Thank you :o)
Date: 6/19/2012 11:01:00 AM
MMMMMHMMMMM.... this is STEEEEEAMY <3
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:13:00 AM
:o) Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 6/18/2012 12:23:00 AM
dan, loaded with subtle, sensual imagery, almost symphonic to the senses... cheers to you and germaine... i'm blown away!..:) huggs!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:07:00 AM
Thank you very much! Glad you liked it. :o)
Date: 6/17/2012 12:55:00 PM
great pen Dan.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:05:00 AM
Thank you,Lisa :o) But I couldn't have done it with out Germaine....
Date: 6/17/2012 10:10:00 AM
Very commendable and so you! It is indeed a pleasure to read your work.. Keep the write-^Up! Up! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS I am going to recommend this one even though all of your poetry are my favorites...
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:03:00 AM
Ha,ha Thanks Gary..Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 6/17/2012 4:09:00 AM
Sensuous and beautiful Dan! A gem ...Samia
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:02:00 AM
It is a bit steamy.... :o) Thank you.
Date: 6/17/2012 12:46:00 AM
well, you did a great collab with Germaine. Steamy for sure.
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:02:00 AM
Steamy indeed! :o)
Date: 6/16/2012 10:11:00 PM
"Steamy, and stupendous I gazing write here Dan, great collaboration once again....Carma"
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 11:01:00 AM
Thank you,Carma...Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 6/16/2012 7:55:00 PM
I admire u--I could never do a collab like this one...way too intense...Great romantic piece, Dan. Have a wonderful Father's Day weekend. :) Gwendolen (who is blushing big time!)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/19/2012 10:39:00 AM
Ha,ha..As Gwendolyn said, I also got a little flusted myself... :o) I Loved writing it!
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Germaine Elliott
Date: 6/18/2012 10:26:00 AM
LOL Gwendolyn i must admit i did get a little flustered as we were soup mailing back and forth! i'm pretty sure i blushed red almost the whole time...however it was so worth it because this is on epic poem that has become a favorite of mine!
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Gwendolen Song
Date: 6/16/2012 7:56:00 PM
Great job Germaine too
Date: 6/16/2012 5:54:00 PM
Yikes...this was awesome...love the imagery and how I was drawn in!!! :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/16/2012 6:13:00 PM
Thanks alot Pace,It was a bit steamy to write!...haha
Date: 6/16/2012 5:43:00 PM
A deep love affair in a beautiful love poem. - f.e.f. oxox love Anne-Lise
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Dan Kearley
Date: 6/16/2012 6:11:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it. :o) Well I hope you liked it? f.e.f.oxox

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