Loves Glory

Dreaming in the clouds
a stag of elegance 
gracing with royal beauty
An emblem draws peace
inside the heart

You're eyes 
dazzling smiles
travels inside
to a whole new world
Leading me into
the promised land

With a sprinkling
of sweet smelling 
rose petals
Sending one piece
the foundations stone
to begin building 
our palace on feelings

Dream embracing beauty
soft velvet 
satin touching emotions
caressing within
The crowning glory
enchanting magic sings
Heaven's purest angel
the one of love

Each heartbeat 
steams this ship 
sailing with you
closer into 
the sun setting
Paradise kisses you
in a spin 
of daisies 
One chain darling
draped around 
you're neck

I believe 
in you love
As the sun 
sets beautiful
inside honey
golden happy

~ ~ ~ ~ 
I wrote this for someones special birthday 
only I sent another one instead with a forever promise in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nair Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:32 AM
Its amazing how you write so enticingly on luv all the time. Kudos 2 u my friend.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:23 AM
thank you so much for your kind and so very beautiful comment ever so deeply appreciated bless you
Trichet Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Truly beautiful write Liam - such heartfelt love
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:18 AM
thank you kindly mark touching beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:55 AM
such tender melody, liam... an adorable dedication for someone's birthday!.. huggs
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