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Love's Fire

                          







He flew away, soaring high, like a young condor

         With a thousand dreams in his heart

                      His mind, a compass, set toward the eastern shore

                              To find his love waiting, beneath the stars

                                        Two lovers, united, blazing bright from afar.
















Written on 6/17/2015
 Simile/Metaphor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/10/2015 11:35:00 PM
hey, this is quite the gem I had not seen. And I see you won. BIG congrats. glad to finally see this one.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/11/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, for taking the time to read a few other of my recent poems! I feel honored :)
Date: 6/30/2015 10:57:00 PM
laura Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/1/2015 12:23:00 AM
Thank you, Skat. I enjoyed writing this one, as it related to the romance between him and his true love, now his wife :)
Date: 6/30/2015 3:31:00 PM
I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Congrats on your win …Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/30/2015 3:36:00 PM
Thanks your very much, Sara! I was delighted to place in your contest, too! This poem was based on our son, Jeffrey, who travelled from California to New York, chasing his true love, Lindy! They married within the year :)
Date: 6/19/2015 1:41:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic!! This should soar high in the contest! #7 // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/19/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! It actually took forever to get this poem where I liked it. I edited it SO many times, lol :)
Date: 6/19/2015 11:11:00 AM
Imaginative wizardry with the pen. Well written. Emile. #7
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/19/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Emile, for taking the time to read my poem! You are always welcome here :)
Date: 6/19/2015 4:36:00 AM
powerful and brilliant write Laura, good luck in the contest.........A.M.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/19/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Afolabi, for stopping by with your kind comments. They are encouraging :)
Date: 6/18/2015 8:56:00 PM
Laura, this is beautiful. Good luck in the contest:) Alexis
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/18/2015 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis! So glad you like it :)
Date: 6/18/2015 3:45:00 AM
- Sweet and beautiful, Laura - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:13:00 AM
Brilliant. x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/18/2015 12:43:00 AM
Thanks, Viv :)