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Love's everlasting Dance

with every night that keeps passing with everyday our love keeps lasting I keep growing more fond of you My hopes and dreams become your wishes and your smiles become my kisses I'm going to hold on to you you give me what i need so in this dance i'll let you lead we'll move around the dance floor keep dancing to tune of love swooping like doves until the clock says good night under the black sky that's where we'll lye and sleep to the melody I'll stay in your arms that hold me tight I'll stay til morning light when the sun says awake we'll stand on our feet and once again to the beat we'll start dancing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/8/2009 7:40:00 PM
Hope you enjoy the soup as much as I enjoy reading you ...good write and welcome, here is praying love stays too
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Date: 12/7/2009 7:57:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight..Marty
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Date: 12/7/2009 5:00:00 PM
What a beautiful profession of love, Rachel! You are so lucky to have found someone who makes you feel this way. And I really like the original verse form you have developed here, not confined to one of the forms listed here. Innovative and inspiring! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:08:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rachel. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2009 3:45:00 PM
nice poem, Rachel. enjoyed. Robert
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