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Loves Eternal Embrace

Will my love wither away? Beyond death’s destructive door Or will it soar throughout eternity, my love... And thus I shall have a chance to prove my Devotion to you... That I may woo you beyond time, And thus your love will become mine... Say that it is so my love, our passion lives forever Or does it fade into the empty never of the forgotten, Our souls left to rot in the abyss of solitudes I pray that our love will be renewed...like the Phoenix But alas in this plane of reality I have lost your love... You were once my Venus...and I your Prince ~But now~ Am I not an empty shell? A crystal egg if you will, as I slowly swell... In my excrement's of love, Am I not a fetus freak? Abandoned by the love I seek, void full tears... Am I not a decaying embryo? If not your love be my foe, a sacrificial lamb... Forgive me for I do not ponder at your empty words For they are daggers that indiscriminately wander, toward my heart... Oh such treachery, such calamity...I am defecating in my shell So full of apathy my love, as you chain up my soul... Be not thy name of thy bride be sorrow, For I do not see such tomorrows in the skies above... Am I not a speck of dust? Floating aimlessly in the cyclone of love, For I land on the crust, of wasted years... Am I not a contorted thought? A tasty morsel left to rot for the vultures... Am I not buried in a shallow grave? Where corpses crave love again... Is not my heart a waking wound? For it be marooned on the island of Lost Souls Such tidal waves of Destruction... Soon my heart shall cease to function, for I be not in love, no more. Dec.08.2017 Move Me, and Others Sponsored by: Madison Demetros

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Arturo Michael

Date: 12/18/2017 4:44:00 PM

No matter what you think the last line of your poem indicates you'll have to press the refresh button and start over again. I actually enjoyed it...All the best WW

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2017 8:03:00 PM

W W, this one has a lot of thought put into it. It's very poetic!!! The last part, I just loved the way you ended it! Good luck in that contest. I see the judge increased the number of entries. Like we need ANY more competition!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2017 11:44:00 AM

piercing work so intimately told, WW... very well done!..huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2017 10:51:00 AM

One of the very best I have read today. Well done my friend.

Silent One

Date: 12/10/2017 6:39:00 AM

A moving poem that will do very well in the contest.. Nice music to accompany it..

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/10/2017 1:44:00 AM

Excellent. Written with emotion. very moving poem. Thanks for sharing it.

James Swartz

Date: 12/9/2017 11:20:00 PM

I am moved WW! Your words will move mountains! This is such an amazing write.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 10:40:00 PM

Man, that's some heavy pain you laid on us, WW. Dark as a midnight moonless sky, enough sorrow to make an old lion cry. Your wept deep tears on this love-is-a-hurting-thing poetic suffering write. Very sad prose of soul pain. Gothic dark and emotional rich poetry. Excellent job of conveying such inner turmoil. Love and smiles always.

Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2017 9:39:00 AM

The endless journey of love....Great write WW

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/9/2017 8:24:00 AM

WOWEE ^WW^ How can one not love a soul like you. Amazing write my dear friend. This is poetry is its magnificent. I love it and one of my favorite by you. I don't need to wish you luck, it's already a winner in my heart... huge white smiles and hugs :)

Maria Williams

Date: 12/8/2017 11:28:00 PM

Oh WW your profound poetic lines are so amazing in their depth of emotion. You are truly a genius with your internal rhyming , and this is a mix of both which is so good.Love it my friend...Maria

Maria Williams
Date: 12/10/2017 5:30:00 AM

Forgot to say good luck in the contest, so mesmerised was i in your words and music. But I think you know this is a Winner...Maria

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 12/8/2017 6:38:00 PM

Wow, Winged. This is superb! The words you use are so deep and emotional. Winner, winner, chicken dinner.

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/8/2017 4:19:00 PM

Such sadness, but that was the point, I suspect, well done WW, best wishes...

Constance La France

Date: 12/8/2017 3:56:00 PM

Winged, what an incredible write, for sure it moved me, looks like a winner to me !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/8/2017 9:35:00 AM

It moved me--very well written as always WW--best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/8/2017 7:46:00 AM

- A poem full of emotions, W.W. ... it moves me deep - Excellent written for this contest, good luck - A winning poem, I have to bet :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)