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Loves Essence

Dedicated to: "The Rambling Poet" Inspired by her beautiful picture There is nothing more heartbreaking than the demise of ones essence no longer could she hold loves magic alone within herself she tried to trick the Gods into believing his love was still there but they knew they always do he was gone and along with him his love followed her world of sunshine and candy kisses was no more the darkened path lay ahead as tears traced down her cheek her face shown brightly one more time as his essence rose away and vanished into the night his soul was no longer touching hers she lay herself down and closed her eyes one last time and so to ends her precious rhyme...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 3:36:00 PM
Sharon, I am brushing a tear away, this poem is so beautiful, you captured my pain so well with your words, going to my fav's for sure, love Constance
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Date: 3/11/2011 3:18:00 PM
I hope you have told Constance you posted this, Sharon. She will love the dedication. I'll send her an email to be sure she sees this. Indeed, Constance is a wonderful, sensitive lady. And thanks so much for the Soup mail. I am relieved to hear there was no quake in SF. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 5:25:00 AM
Lovely words so passionate to express the photo Constance provided Shar.. grace and elegance in thoughtful pose luv.. did u not enter the contes? closed now but this is fantastic expression of inner feelings luv.. happy weekend my friend..
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Date: 3/10/2011 11:46:00 AM
This melancholy poem which you've written so well, Shar will remain in Constance's memory as a gift from a true friend, I am sure! Great job! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:55:00 AM
Vivid picture, beautifully written. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:15:00 AM
*Smile ~ this amazing painting amid verse is sooo stirring and laced with compassion, beauty and love "My 'Dear, *Beautiful, Gifted & Priceless, Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ "Yes, 'Beautiful *Constance Is A Treasure to Be Loved'" &, "Your *Precious Heart,'" brushed its truth sooo very perfectly within these, bluebright hues; "Beautiful, 'Just Like *You!!!'" ~ "Love, 'Always,'" John!:)* ~
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