Jaycee Cervenka Poet Free verse

Love's Embrace

Love's Embrace

Pre-dawn light peeks
Softly through windows
Lightening shadows to gray
Leaving silhouettes as eyes
Open in drowsy heaviness
Only to realize you observe
Every detail in the quiet.

A long masculine arm raises 
The blanket in silent welcome
As we begin a well-rehearsed 
choreography of body meeting body.

Naked breast to chest, 
we lie in love's warm embrace.
Dark fingers stroke blonde hair
As feminine fingers trace through
a mat of soft crispness over chest.
Occasional kisses rain down--soft; sweet
As relaxed sighs whisper
through our intimate cocoon of comfort.

Deep contentment spreads 
With every swish and beat..
Tha thump- tha thump- tha thump- tha thump
Beneath my ear as our hearts match rhythm. 

Two souls intertwined in the joy of being
Commingled bodies 
At rest
At peace
As the pre-dawn light peeks softly 
Through our bedroom window

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Kp Nunez May 13, 2015 at 8:03 PM Such beauty in this poem on early dawn physical intimacy, Janet. Sensual and tasteful. A 7. :-) Kim Jaycee Cervenka May 14, 2015 at 1:42 PM Thanks you so much Kim! I'm glad you like it..and I try to be tasteful...but it is sometimes a fine line we walk..gald you thought I stayed on the right side of it! ~Jan

Paul Callus May 12, 2015 at 1:46 PM Warm and sensual early dawn embrace; for some souls it's the best time of the day! Lovely and dignified poem. #7 // paul Jaycee Cervenka May 14, 2015 at 1:43 PM I'm not a morning person, so it definitely helps start my day off a little bit brighter! Thanks for stopping in Paul! ~Jan

Thomas Martin May 12, 2015 at 9:47 AM Simply beautiful, Janet! Loved the feel of it! Jaycee Cervenka May 12, 2015 at 11:30 AM Thanks Thomas, was trying to recreate that pre-dawn calm and quiet, with a sense of peace.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 12, 2015 at 9:44 AM Ahem sensational and boy i can relate to such in early dawn snuggling with soulmate. But mayb cant write so sensationaly and express as superbly as u did. I enjoyd yor word choice too, 'cocoon, choreography and more. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too. Jaycee Cervenka May 12, 2015 at 11:28 AM My day does not start right when he is not there. Thanks for reading!

David Meade May 11, 2015 at 10:24 PM What a perfect way to greet the morning -- darkness into light, sleepiness giving way to all the possibilities that a day of love can bring -- I delightful write, enjoyed the warmth of the moment. 7 Jaycee Cervenka May 12, 2015 at 8:45 AM Thanks so much David!

Wilma Neels May 11, 2015 at 6:11 AM Enjoyed this sensual write of yours this afternoon Janet :) enjoy the week ahead Jaycee Cervenka May 11, 2015 at 9:51 AM Thanks so much Wilma, for stopping by.

Jan Allison May 10, 2015 at 8:00 AM Wow Janet a wonderful sensual write loved the imagery beautifully done:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Jaycee Cervenka May 10, 2015 at 9:11 AM Thank so much Jan! Hope you sre having a beautiful day! ((HUGS))~Janet