Love's Embrace

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The moment our lips meet my darling we are lost drifting in the scattered night sky floating with celestial stars and spinning planets . . . silhouettes locked in love's embrace mingling with the colors of the moon and you reach up and capture a sparkling polar star for us to keep forever and you whisper in my ear you are my Venus my beautiful evening star ________________________ January 4, 2020 Poetry/Free Verse/Love's Embrace Copyright Protected, ID 20-1213-964-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Picture Prompt sponsor, Brenda Chiri First Place

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2020 8:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your top win ... beautiful, Constanse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2020 10:06:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _Constance

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/28/2020 12:02:00 AM

This was simply a beautiful description of the pic! Thank you for entering and congratulations on your top win!;)

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2020 10:08:00 AM

Brenda, thanks for the inspiring contest and the beautiful image and for my great placement, appreciate _Constance