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Loves Doubling Helix

Storms seductive desiring of dreams Forms favoring moonlight of beams Craving hearts upon starlit nights Waving wands of unicorned flights ~~~ Light shimmering with eyes glowing Bright crystals amongst rivers flowing Mountains lying with floras displaying Fountains spewing near flowers swaying * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * Strands interlocking like arming lovers Hands caressing under warming covers Double helix of love pursuing pleasure Bubbles bursting kisses of treasure ~~~ Nocturnal nuptials amidst drinking wine Eternal love within endless sunshine Desires spiraling before flames creating Fires brewing love forever pulsating. This '360 Double Helix Reversible' which can be read backward and in reverse, is dedicated to all the beautiful and talented Poetesses of the Soup Bowl... Sorry gentlemen, ladies first... I thank you, my poetic sisters, from the bottom of my DNA lol: ...Heidi Sands, Maria Williams, Agnes Krampe, Andrea Dietrich, Maureen McGreavy, Line Gauthier, Sunshine Smile(Anne-Lise), Rhoda Tripp, Jan Allison, Susan Ashley, Brenda Chiri, Akkina Downing, Jo Daniel, Eve Roper, Susan Gentry, Brandy Nicole, Sandra Haight, Nette Onclaud, Catie Lindsey, Connie Marcum Wong, Leanne Love-Joy Burton, Cay Cay Jennings, Laura Loo, Alexis Y, Carol Connel, Pantida Sanchez, Dear Heart, Besma Riabi Dziri, Kim Rodrigues, Anna Hopper, Carole Duet, Laura Leiser, Casarah Nance, Lisa Ricci, Becca Teagan, Carolyn Devonshire, Caren Krutsinger, Lin Lane, Tania Kitchin, Robertina B., Janice Canerdy, Michele Faulkner, Sara Kendrick, M.L. Kiser, Nina Parmenter, Holy Primerano, Darlene De Beaulieu, Jean Murray, Eileen Manassian, Charmaine Chircop, Judith S., Carrie Richards, Virginia Waters, Bette Bavington, Nayda Ivette Negron, Laura Breidenthal, Poet A. Destroyer...and the rest on Poetry Isle... Please forgive me if, I...left anyone out who has supported me over the years... or misspelled your name...if I did...please soup mail me and I shall correct. ...we are all one within the light... Sept.12.2018 SEPTEMBER PREMIERE 2018 ANY FORM,ANY THEME Sponsored by: Brian Strand N/A for contest

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Gary Bateman

Date: 10/7/2018 2:23:00 PM

Hello WW, I am very glad to see here that your Doubling Helix masterpiece made the Top 100 Poems List!! My lastest comment here only further echoes my original comment below from 14 September. A marvelous write for sure!! Best Wishes, Gary

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/28/2018 3:55:00 PM

WoW! Greeaaatt poem, WW. Reversible retrograde read action too. So cool. Do we have to burn after reading? LOL! In my humble opinion, it should be in the Concrete form aisle. Beautiful double helix too. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/14/2018 4:22:00 PM

Hello WW, I must say most outstanding and most artfully-done, Sir!! Yes, most certainly -- "we are all one within the light." Supremus Maximus!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/14/2018 9:09:00 AM

Fabulous creation--so creative and descriptively ALIVE. And THANKS, WW! Janice

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/14/2018 3:39:00 AM

Very interesting very clever WW. What about the rest of us, are we junk DNA or Mitochondrial DNA? Do we have different Adenine? Do we cry with different Guanine? Are we laugh with less Thymine and cytosine? LOL... nicely done...

Pashang Salehi
Date: 9/14/2018 11:04:00 AM

Thanks for the vote of confidence... Indeed life is an anomaly... Have a great weekend ...

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:30:00 AM

No! my friend, I've not forgotten about you lol...you may be part of the units called nucleotides or in the sequence of amino acids...but no sir no junk DNA or Mitochondrial DNA lol...in fact if you look really close inside a DNA strand...you will find where it says 'Made In Heaven'...and even closer still, "With All My Love' lol...love & light...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/13/2018 8:34:00 PM

now, i am speechless, WW... such a splendor of a poem delighting me on and on... love the form as well... thanks too for being you!..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 5:00:00 AM

Wow! I never got a 'speechless'...from a superb poetess like you...thank you my friend...L&L...^WW^

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/12/2018 4:21:00 PM

Wow, you have superceded every expectation. I love it

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend...please forgive me, but are you male or female?...L&L...^WW^

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/12/2018 3:31:00 PM

Oh my!! You have created another Masterpiece!! If you are trying to take the breath away, then you have successfully succeeded. So sweet of you to dedicate this to so many. My heart is smiling and blushing, all at the same time. :) Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:51:00 AM

My dear beautiful friend...Brandy, because of you, the warrior in me is on the loose...your poetic essence has left me, smiling and blushing lol...L&L...^WW^

Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

I hope I am allowed to comment on this seeing that I am not of the female poetic persuasion, but if not, then just ignore this. : ) This was absolutely gorgeous, your poetic lines truly define the feeling of love and adoration. How you have combined all of this and created a piece that can be read forward or backwards or any way for that matter. Simply divine my friend.

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:42:00 AM

Of course, my friend, anyone is...the warrior never locks anyone out...unless I owe you money, well...lol...thank you kindly for the beautiful comment Chris...L&L...^WW^

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 12:55:00 PM

This is so awesome, WW. You have a great talent my friend. A teacher of poetry...love and helix...Charlie

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:38:00 AM

Thank you Charlieku lol...that name is going to stick...you know that...and I also love it...L&L...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2018 12:42:00 PM

Now this is really IMPRESSIVE WW! I could never write anything this complicated. Bravo! I appreciate being included in your wonderful notes. I hope it getson his list. Thank you! : )

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:36:00 AM

Thank you, dear Connie...you would be surprised...give it a try...just got to think backwards lol...L&L...^WW^

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/12/2018 12:15:00 PM

You are getting down to the chemistry of things...A triple hex lover...Creative write...All the best WW

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:34:00 AM

Thank you my chemical brother lol...L&L...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/12/2018 10:42:00 AM

Wow! A Beauty to the eye, mind and heart what you have carved with your words that are streaming from the ocean of your "DNA"! You bear the seeds of creation into your genes Winged Warrior! Never ceased to bewilder your fervent reader! A pen dripping of genuine and generous poetry.. A heart of Love and Light.. Thank you so much dear fellow poet for sharing your refined beauty of your high esteem for your fellow poetesses.. A FAV. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/14/2018 4:32:00 AM

Thank you my dear Besma...your words are heavenly and thank you so much more for the fav...love & light...^WW^