Love's Direction

Love's Direction


Love is like,
a balloon in flight
It comes floating your way,
for a single second
Changes direction,
if it's not caught.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
March 10, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Ahhhhh, a trueism! But if you want that ballon chase it! LOL Love Ya Maryam..new contest check it out!
Gass Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 11:45 AM
Well said, Maryam. Your images in this poem are wonderful and your words hold wisdom! ove, Robin
Winter Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Great analogy as so often true. Love, Shar
Higgins Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 5:06 AM
Yep my poetic friend.. it has blown away from me a few times..I need to have quicker hands..LOL..well done.
Ginn Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 12:47 PM
Oh Maryam what vivid imagery and sadly all too true. Great job.
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