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Love's Devotion

For the one I love with Angel eyes, That could part the sea with strength of heart, Unbreakable steel with courage beholds, An everlasting love thy feel for thee. Valiant, Honor, Handsome, Charm, Endurance he has as light is long. Shielded with scales of golden stone, Fighting battles with heart's sword. Thy faithful love is pure and true, Always, forever, endlessly, With chains of love thy bound to thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/7/2010 11:27:00 PM
Welcome Laura, I like fairytale imagery!
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Date: 2/5/2010 8:32:00 PM
Thank you everyone for your support as this is new to me. I appreciate your good comments and welcomes.
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:54:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... there is always much to say about the subject of love .. u have said is very well... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/5/2010 10:49:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellentpoetry today Laura. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:46:00 AM
Great tribute, I love the quiet pacing and delicate rhythm ... so full of sincerity. Welcome to poetry soup, the home of poets and friends, and I shall be honored to have you as more friend. One love, my friend
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Date: 2/5/2010 4:13:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Laura. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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