Loves Creation

“We are the creation of eternal love...fragmental sparks of the divine”


In the womb of all creation
Lies a love we can not see
We can feel its incubation
As we travel our destiny.



Sept.03.2016
One and One - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 1:46 AM
This is short, sweet and brilliant. Congrats. Travel safely.
Haight Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 12:44 PM
So much wisdom and faith expressed in these four short lines, Winged Warrior. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 12:10 PM
WW, very wise and yes we are fragments of the sparks of the divine!! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Godwin Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 9:49 PM
I love this, love this, love this - and it tells me you would appreciate mine. Like-minded, me thinks! CayCay
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much CayCay...you thinks! good lol...god bless...^WW^
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:02 PM
very good message in this one. Good luck in the contest. i wish something like this would come to ME!!
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Andrea...god bless...^WW^
Roper Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 10:33 AM
^WW^, love this intriguing piece. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Thank you Eve...god bless...^WW^
Bohto Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 8:01 PM
We are created with His divine attributes ... We are the love in His destiny... Before conception.. written in our DNA codes... Do we hear his calling...or do we stop listening...To our Divine callers Being? Of how he made you and me. Loved this write. Fly free with your wings.
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thank you so much Holly...god bless...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 4:17 PM
"Fragmental sparks of the divine" nice line if for a contest it will...I said it will...do well! but then again I could be totally wrong! I think it's great! Applause to the earthly vehicle WW.
Warrior Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thank you John...god bless...^WW^
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