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Loves Creation

“We are the creation of eternal love...fragmental sparks of the divine” In the womb of all creation Lies a love we can not see We can feel its incubation As we travel our destiny. Sept.03.2016 One and One - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/12/2016 1:46:00 AM

This is short, sweet and brilliant. Congrats. Travel safely.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/10/2016 12:44:00 PM

So much wisdom and faith expressed in these four short lines, Winged Warrior. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra

Rick Parise

Date: 9/10/2016 12:34:00 PM

Congrats......

Lu Loo

Date: 9/10/2016 12:10:00 PM

WW, very wise and yes we are fragments of the sparks of the divine!! congrats on your placement :)-luloo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/5/2016 9:49:00 PM

I love this, love this, love this - and it tells me you would appreciate mine. Like-minded, me thinks! CayCay

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/6/2016 9:29:00 AM

Thank you so much CayCay...you thinks! good lol...god bless...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2016 6:02:00 PM

very good message in this one. Good luck in the contest. i wish something like this would come to ME!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/6/2016 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea...god bless...^WW^

Eve Roper

Date: 9/4/2016 10:33:00 AM

^WW^, love this intriguing piece. Good luck in the contest. Hugs

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/6/2016 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Eve...god bless...^WW^

Holly Bohto

Date: 9/3/2016 8:01:00 PM

We are created with His divine attributes ... We are the love in His destiny... Before conception.. written in our DNA codes... Do we hear his calling...or do we stop listening...To our Divine callers Being? Of how he made you and me. Loved this write. Fly free with your wings.

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/6/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much Holly...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 9/3/2016 4:17:00 PM

"Fragmental sparks of the divine" nice line if for a contest it will...I said it will...do well! but then again I could be totally wrong! I think it's great! Applause to the earthly vehicle WW.

Winged Warrior
Date: 9/6/2016 8:56:00 AM

Thank you John...god bless...^WW^