Love's Chemical Derivatives

Can  love then,  be based
on an index of elements
from which one joyfully tumbles,
or drifts into equations, as we wander
toward a rush of serendipity ...
a metaphysical merging of  ardor
writhing in a shared communion 
like  tuneful whispers in breaths  of helium,
unabbreviated oxygen rhapsodies
from unbidden laughter,
invigorating  the warmth of co-owned stars
on heaven’s destined oracle?

Love transcends chemical derivatives
of  fractals or measurement,
between our atoms, relaxed
in the shuffle of emotional electrons
as we quiver  weightless...
the heart’s embrace suspended together 
in the affectionate cosmos
of a deep kiss.



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“How on earth can you explain in terms 
of chemistry and physics so important 
a ...phenomenon as first love? “-- Albert Einstein


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Strength Through Adversity Contest: Gregory R Barden
Re-post: 3/25/2019

~ It was a challenge for me to translate in meaningful ways
this abstract concept, 'physics  of love,' but somehow
made sense of it by affirming that such is beyond mere science.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/6/2019 8:58:00 AM
There is always such meaningful thought and beauty in your exceptional poetry, Nette. Your poetic prowess and artistry stirs my imagination once again.. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 4/3/2019 9:50:00 PM
You made the challenge with a well written poem, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/11/2017 8:19:00 PM
Is there such a thing? LOL
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:37:00 PM
love how you explain our pheromones! great write!
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:42:00 AM
This was beautifully written, I love how you use chemistry, equations and atons to bring togetger love in a simple form as atoms~Suzette Campbell
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Date: 9/20/2017 4:18:00 AM
This is my first encounter with your poetry, and I can immediately see what a talented natural poet you are. Your verses are replete with striking metaphors, beautiful and naturally flowing words that convey an unanswerable message with knowledge and intelligence.
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Date: 6/13/2017 1:26:00 PM
You are a scientist of love, nicely related the actions of combinations of helium, Oxygen... and after experiments finally got the affectionate kiss of Cosmos. Lovely poem, my fav. Loved always my lovely dear friend, bl
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Date: 11/27/2015 11:25:00 PM
This poem shows that love is a mystical power which cannot be analyzed by us mortals. Especially liked the last line! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/13/2015 2:49:00 AM
Fun withthe reductionism on LOVE! Enjoyed the science references...the math! If only it were that simple...right? Enjoyed this. From a poet geek!
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Date: 1/12/2015 5:38:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Nice quotation,great poetess...Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:31:00 PM
Nette,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:28:00 AM
Oh Nette, this poem is so impressive, spellbinding! Congratulations on your well deserved win! I am fav'ing this one.
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:29:00 PM
Congrats!!! Way to go..Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 6:51:00 AM
"Love transcends" and so does your poetry. It elevates the reader to new highs of emotion and thought.
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:40:00 AM
Many congratulations Nette luv xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 12:25:00 AM
Marvellous Nette! Elements gone lively n so emotional in ur write! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 9:30:00 PM
Great write Nette....Congrats on your win...fav
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:56:00 PM
Nette you are always a joy to read, this one is no exception and will sit in my FAVE. cONGRATS AND HUGGS
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:37:00 PM
Love versus a nuclear holocaust destroying the world YEAH, love wins, if only. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:28:00 PM
Your poems are always above and beyond extraordinary....this is stunning, dear Nette! A well deserved congratulations!
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:57:00 PM
Nette, this is so beautiful! Congratulations on your 1st Place win! As Paul said below, "your mind saw far beyond" just the facts of figures and symbols! Amazing! 7 +Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/6/2015 4:51:00 PM
Wow, nette, so creative, Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:16:00 PM
WOW!! 7+++ True words of love couldn't be written any better, Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:24:00 PM
I was sure you will be either 1 or 2. But you rocked and grabbed the first.CONGRATULATIONS. I 'm so happy. rajat
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:12:00 PM
Your versatility pays off here, I am happy Anthony did this Poem and you this honour .This has really seprated the grain from the chaff,; you are the former nette,congrats...huggs
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