Love's Chemical Derivatives

Can  love then,  be based
on an index of elements
from which one joyfully tumbles,
or drifts into equations, as we wander
toward a rush of serendipity ...
a metaphysical merging of  ardor
writhing in a shared communion 
like  tuneful whispers in breaths  of helium,
unabbreviated oxygen rhapsodies
from unbidden laughter,
invigorating  the warmth of co-owned stars
on heaven’s destined oracle?

Love transcends chemical derivatives
of  fractals or measurement,
between our atoms, relaxed
in the shuffle of emotional electrons
as we quiver  weightless...
the heart’s embrace suspended together 
in the affectionate cosmos
of a deep kiss.



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“How on earth can you explain in terms 
of chemistry and physics so important 
a ...phenomenon as first love? “-- Albert Einstein


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Strength Through Adversity Contest: Gregory R Barden
Re-post: 3/25/2019

~ It was a challenge for me to translate in meaningful ways
this abstract concept, 'physics  of love,' but somehow
made sense of it by affirming that such is beyond mere science.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ashley Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 8:58 AM
There is always such meaningful thought and beauty in your exceptional poetry, Nette. Your poetic prowess and artistry stirs my imagination once again.. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 9:50 PM
You made the challenge with a well written poem, Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gist Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Is there such a thing? LOL
Franceschini Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:37 PM
love how you explain our pheromones! great write!
Campbell  Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:42 AM
This was beautifully written, I love how you use chemistry, equations and atons to bring togetger love in a simple form as atoms~Suzette Campbell
Brewer Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 4:18 AM
This is my first encounter with your poetry, and I can immediately see what a talented natural poet you are. Your verses are replete with striking metaphors, beautiful and naturally flowing words that convey an unanswerable message with knowledge and intelligence.
Devnath  Avatar
June 13, 2017 at 1:26 PM
You are a scientist of love, nicely related the actions of combinations of helium, Oxygen... and after experiments finally got the affectionate kiss of Cosmos. Lovely poem, my fav. Loved always my lovely dear friend, bl
Anish Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 11:25 PM
This poem shows that love is a mystical power which cannot be analyzed by us mortals. Especially liked the last line! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Nau Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:49 AM
Fun withthe reductionism on LOVE! Enjoyed the science references...the math! If only it were that simple...right? Enjoyed this. From a poet geek!
Arowolo Avatar
January 12, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Wonderful piece,Nice quotation,great poetess...Congrats on your superb win...
A   Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 9:31 PM
Nette,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 3:28 AM
Oh Nette, this poem is so impressive, spellbinding! Congratulations on your well deserved win! I am fav'ing this one.
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 2:29 PM
Congrats!!! Way to go..Sara
Sirak Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 6:51 AM
"Love transcends" and so does your poetry. It elevates the reader to new highs of emotion and thought.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Many congratulations Nette luv xx
A. Sharma Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 12:25 AM
Marvellous Nette! Elements gone lively n so emotional in ur write! Congrats on top place win!
May Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Great write Nette....Congrats on your win...fav
Trichet Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 6:56 PM
Nette you are always a joy to read, this one is no exception and will sit in my FAVE. cONGRATS AND HUGGS
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Love versus a nuclear holocaust destroying the world YEAH, love wins, if only. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 5:28 PM
Your poems are always above and beyond extraordinary....this is stunning, dear Nette! A well deserved congratulations!
Haight Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Nette, this is so beautiful! Congratulations on your 1st Place win! As Paul said below, "your mind saw far beyond" just the facts of figures and symbols! Amazing! 7 +Fav, Hugs, Sandra
Yvonne Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 4:51 PM
Wow, nette, so creative, Congratulations on your first place win!
Roper Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 1:16 PM
WOW!! 7+++ True words of love couldn't be written any better, Nette. Congratulations on your win :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:24 PM
I was sure you will be either 1 or 2. But you rocked and grabbed the first.CONGRATULATIONS. I 'm so happy. rajat
Kayode Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Your versatility pays off here, I am happy Anthony did this Poem and you this honour .This has really seprated the grain from the chaff,; you are the former nette,congrats...huggs
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