Love's Breath Taken

To have your eyes slide over my body
Fills me with a trembling rapture

A need so great as to be 
a sweet slow spreading pain

Your touch turns me to searing desire
Comsuming all thought but that of our lovemaking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 8:58 PM
This is very romantic and full of passion. Lots of emotion and feeling. Very intensely passionate nice job
Devonshire Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 5:25 AM
I love the sensual quality in this poem, Paula. Best wishes, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 2:23 AM
A very passionate poem. A trembling rapture - nice image
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