Loves Body

Love's Body
stung once before,
by an orchard
tangled

into a rose bush,
pricking a lone

sunflower.

She closed the blinds 
and fell 
asleep.
 
Love’s body
returned, and she
awoke with 

one,
kiss,

from a blue hydrangea. 

Roses encompassed them,
remaining untouched.

They were still.


Love’s new body,  
a blue hydrangea and a not so lone

sunflower.

Sitting beside a rose garden.
The hydrangea whispers,

"I’ll close the blinds
so you can
sleep.”

Tomorrow,
she’ll raise them,
so that they both may
grow
with the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 12, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Elizabeth Cabrera, awesome to see this one again. linda
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February 17, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Elizabeth.
Gentry Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on your win! I like this, cleverly written.
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February 17, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Hi Elizabeth, dropping by with Congratulations on your placement in Skat's contest....Vlad.
A   Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Elizabeth, congrats on your wonderful love poem. Thanks for Supporting a Skat Contest, while she is away. Love LINDA
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February 17, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Elizabeth, thank you for the support. :) SK
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