Lena Townsend Poet Quatrain

Lovers Utopia

Magical crescent moon
Shining on the path below
Lighting the way for lovers
Together as they stroll

Exploring the enchantment
Of the animals and the trees
Finding their own Utopia
Beneath natures canopy

Together they may hear
A love birds sweet melody
As the crickets and a bullfrog
Seem to join in harmony

Sparkling stars and dewdrops
Fireflies dance about merrily
As winds song within the leaves
Plays a lovers symphony

The smell of jasmine in the air
Rose and chamomile so sweet
With just a soft hint of patchouli
A lovers perfume as they meet

The mystery and excitement
Passionate kisses, perfect date
These two lovers souls connect 
In this mesmerizing place

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June 5, 2010 at 9:12 PM Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown June 4, 2010 at 2:29 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Lena. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2010 at 10:29 AM Congrats Lolita on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend... good luck.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Katherine Stella May 30, 2010 at 10:15 AM Congrats Lena on this being featured this week this reminds me of romeo and juliet that fairytail effect imagery was perfection thanks for sharign keep up the great writing

Michael Jordan May 28, 2010 at 6:18 PM Lena - very beautiful and mesmerizing poetry -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown May 25, 2010 at 5:35 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lena. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher May 24, 2010 at 1:11 PM Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week - I enjoyed reading very much. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 23, 2010 at 9:21 PM Congrats Lolita on your featured poem this week on the Soup... wonderful words to share.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

May 23, 2010 at 4:27 PM Nice use of imagery to convey your story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen

James Peranteau May 6, 2009 at 2:54 AM Lolita,..I love this poem, it keeps me on my toes,...yes !, there are flowers that smell beautiful! ty for this write....james

Brian Strand May 2, 2009 at 1:02 AM Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Lolita Rgds Brian

Ivan Beresford April 29, 2009 at 4:02 PM Tell you what sweetheart, add a fresh hot cup of tea, an' i'll walk there with you whenever you need the words i write to keep a smile upon your face. Your friend Ivan.

L'Nass Shango April 27, 2009 at 10:10 AM Give me company to stroll upon down this place of words, and laugh deliriously with joy. Keep bringing it ... like this!

Laurie Ginn April 27, 2009 at 6:09 AM You had me at the crescent moon, beautiful imagery Lena, very sweet write.

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2009 at 2:09 PM What a lovely stroll under the "magical crescent moon," Lolita! A perfect place for romance, "Passionate kisses." Now if I could just find the "perfect date." Might that be April 27? Just kidding. We dateless ones are a bit silly sometimes. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards April 26, 2009 at 8:23 AM Almost seems it should be set to lovely music....soft violins and harps. Sweet one, Lena. Love, Carrie

Brian Strand April 26, 2009 at 8:16 AM Beautiful imagery Lolita...that phrase'Sparkling stars and dewdrops/Fireflies dance .One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Christopher Higgins April 26, 2009 at 6:54 AM This is well written and very romantic..love the opening stanza..it sets the mood for this piece..well done.