Lovers Utopia

Magical crescent moon
Shining on the path below
Lighting the way for lovers
Together as they stroll

Exploring the enchantment
Of the animals and the trees
Finding their own Utopia
Beneath natures canopy

Together they may hear
A love birds sweet melody
As the crickets and a bullfrog
Seem to join in harmony

Sparkling stars and dewdrops
Fireflies dance about merrily
As winds song within the leaves
Plays a lovers symphony

The smell of jasmine in the air
Rose and chamomile so sweet
With just a soft hint of patchouli
A lovers perfume as they meet

The mystery and excitement
Passionate kisses, perfect date
These two lovers souls connect 
In this mesmerizing place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 6/5/2010 9:12:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Lena. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 10:29:00 AM
Congrats Lolita on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend... good luck.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/30/2010 10:15:00 AM
Congrats Lena on this being featured this week this reminds me of romeo and juliet that fairytail effect imagery was perfection thanks for sharign keep up the great writing
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:18:00 PM
Lena - very beautiful and mesmerizing poetry -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lena. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:11:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week - I enjoyed reading very much. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/23/2010 9:21:00 PM
Congrats Lolita on your featured poem this week on the Soup... wonderful words to share.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/23/2010 4:27:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to convey your story. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:54:00 AM
Lolita,..I love this poem, it keeps me on my toes,...yes !, there are flowers that smell beautiful! ty for this write....james
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Date: 5/2/2009 1:02:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today Lolita Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/29/2009 4:02:00 PM
Tell you what sweetheart, add a fresh hot cup of tea, an' i'll walk there with you whenever you need the words i write to keep a smile upon your face. Your friend Ivan.
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:10:00 AM
Give me company to stroll upon down this place of words, and laugh deliriously with joy. Keep bringing it ... like this!
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Date: 4/27/2009 6:09:00 AM
You had me at the crescent moon, beautiful imagery Lena, very sweet write.
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Date: 4/26/2009 2:09:00 PM
What a lovely stroll under the "magical crescent moon," Lolita! A perfect place for romance, "Passionate kisses." Now if I could just find the "perfect date." Might that be April 27? Just kidding. We dateless ones are a bit silly sometimes. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:23:00 AM
Almost seems it should be set to lovely music....soft violins and harps. Sweet one, Lena. Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/26/2009 8:16:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Lolita...that phrase'Sparkling stars and dewdrops/Fireflies dance .One for my favourites.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/26/2009 6:54:00 AM
This is well written and very romantic..love the opening stanza..it sets the mood for this piece..well done.
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