Lover's Pleasure

LOVER'S PLEASURE 
               

                                      pleasure

                                     ignites my eyes

                                     spins me gently crazy

                                     burns my neck with nibbles

                                     curls toes


Victoria Anderson-Throop
2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 2:08 PM
A marvelous CINQUAIN! You have captured the essence of passion with these magical words. BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks so much for your Soup mail regarding M.S. Your kind remarks are much appreciated!)
Collins Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 7:32 AM
Dear Victoria - The temperature here just rose many degrees. Great great great poem. love, Kathy
Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 4:02 PM
i have re worked this poem.... if you have the time, take a look at the re-write and see what you think!
Horne Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 2:55 PM
beautiful sensual write, my friend
Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 10:03 PM
thanks, Jack....I like this one, too! Sometimes the short ones take the longest to write!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 11:12 PM
this is a sexy one!! I likes it, Victoria. How goes it with you now? you are in Alaska? I hope so, sweetie.
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