Lover's Pleasure

LOVER'S PLEASURE pleasure ignites my eyes spins me gently crazy burns my neck with nibbles curls toes Victoria Anderson-Throop 2013

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/30/2013 2:08:00 PM

A marvelous CINQUAIN! You have captured the essence of passion with these magical words. BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith (PS thanks so much for your Soup mail regarding M.S. Your kind remarks are much appreciated!)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/23/2013 7:32:00 AM

Dear Victoria - The temperature here just rose many degrees. Great great great poem. love, Kathy

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 4/23/2013 4:02:00 PM

i have re worked this poem.... if you have the time, take a look at the re-write and see what you think!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/19/2013 2:55:00 PM

beautiful sensual write, my friend

Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 4/21/2013 10:03:00 PM

thanks, Jack....I like this one, too! Sometimes the short ones take the longest to write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2013 11:12:00 PM

this is a sexy one!! I likes it, Victoria. How goes it with you now? you are in Alaska? I hope so, sweetie.