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Lover's Paradise

A wink of the sun gently caresses my slumbered eyes the rush of the tide slowly moves in and out lightly dampening the virgin white sand on this secluded tropical beach, The scent of coconut fills the fresh oceanic air and then I see you emerging from the churning sea more beautiful than Aphrodite glimmering your long soaked hair reaching down draping that soft sweet skin you sway as you come closer twinkling those caramelized eyes so rich, so full of life staring right at me I speak but you don't let me placing your luscious lips upon mine and we kiss like we have never kissed before as the last drop of water falls off your sundrenched body. At last a lover's paradise

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Date: 7/27/2015 10:01:00 AM
Superb romantic writing my friend, great paradise so many are lucky to find. Congrats on your fine win!A7
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:55:00 AM
Tim, beautiful descriptive write a 7, congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:51:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel Tim!
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:21:00 PM
Hi Tim, l just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2015 8:42:00 PM
TIM. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 8:45:00 AM
Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:34:00 PM
Again I sigh, "if only" Very steamy beautiful wrote Tim!
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Date: 4/12/2015 12:19:00 AM
That is a steamy poem Tim... A 7 .... Linda
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:43:00 PM
beautifully painted piece tim wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend
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Date: 4/10/2015 11:32:00 AM
sure sounds like paradise Tim:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/10/2015 10:20:00 AM
Caramelized eyes and sun- drenched skin feels so mediterranean.: ).Secluded beach with whie sands and coconuts..that's beautiful.An effervescent poemTim .It asks to.br favoured.A fav!Charma
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Date: 4/10/2015 9:12:00 AM
WOW!!! Richard is right! Hot Hot Hot! :) That sure is paradise!!!
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Date: 4/10/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks Eileen. Have a beautiful weekend....hugs Tim
Date: 4/10/2015 8:59:00 AM
This is hot Tim!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/10/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Richard. That's what I was going for... Have a great weekend

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