Lover's Paradise

A wink of the sun gently caresses my slumbered eyes the rush of the tide slowly moves in and out lightly dampening the virgin white sand on this secluded tropical beach, The scent of coconut fills the fresh oceanic air and then I see you emerging from the churning sea more beautiful than Aphrodite glimmering your long soaked hair reaching down draping that soft sweet skin you sway as you come closer twinkling those caramelized eyes so rich, so full of life staring right at me I speak but you don't let me placing your luscious lips upon mine and we kiss like we have never kissed before as the last drop of water falls off your sundrenched body. At last a lover's paradise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 10:01 AM
Superb romantic writing my friend, great paradise so many are lucky to find. Congrats on your fine win!A7
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Tim, beautiful descriptive write a 7, congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
A. Sharma Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 12:51 AM
Congrats on ur winning poetic marvel Tim!
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July 26, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Hi Tim, l just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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July 26, 2015 at 8:42 PM
TIM. Congrats on your win. ThanXs for the support. Love SKAT
Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7
Vaso Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Again I sigh, "if only" Very steamy beautiful wrote Tim!
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April 12, 2015 at 12:19 AM
That is a steamy poem Tim... A 7 .... Linda
Mcdaid Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 7:43 PM
beautifully painted piece tim wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 11:32 AM
sure sounds like paradise Tim:-) Hugs jan xx
Chircop Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Caramelized eyes and sun- drenched skin feels so mediterranean.: ).Secluded beach with whie sands and coconuts..that's beautiful.An effervescent poemTim .It asks to.br favoured.A fav!Charma
Manassian Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 9:12 AM
WOW!!! Richard is right! Hot Hot Hot! :) That sure is paradise!!!
Smith Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Eileen. Have a beautiful weekend....hugs Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 8:59 AM
This is hot Tim!!!
Smith Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thanks Richard. That's what I was going for... Have a great weekend
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