Maryam Jameela Haniff Poet Free verse

Lover's Call

Lover's Call

I'm dizzy I'm spinning
I'm practically falling 
to the ground

I can't see a thing
or even hear a sound

I'm in a fix
just hit me now
with a dozen sticks

Just get me out
I wanna scream and shout
How much I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you so much!

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Serenity D'Nae Montgomery January 9, 2009 at 8:58 AM Great poem girl!! I love it! :)

Robin L. Gass January 6, 2009 at 9:38 AM This is wonderful, Maryam! It does feel like that, sometimes, and a whole lot more. Great write and emotional expression! Thank you for your thoughtful comment. (I think this would be considered "Free Verse") Love, Robin