Lovers

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lovers eyes lock, hands touch as they reach for menus moments of electric tension conversation, drinks sipped, dessert savored inevitable shady scene impugnable action souls never part lovers

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Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2022 4:25:00 AM

The electric shock of love passes through their whole being as hands touch and eyes lock ! Really enjoyed, dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/28/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review. Even though it is illicit love it is love no doubt, or maybe just lust. I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2022 12:06:00 PM

love this romantic write

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2022 1:23:00 PM

Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/18/2022 1:20:00 AM

Stupendous poem, Sara. Romance is never far away.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2022 5:02:00 AM

An illicit affair is never far away most of the time as well. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 7/17/2022 8:56:00 PM

Food + drink, eyes locked, hands touched - all bridges to romance. Enjoyed your posting + its tribute to love. Be well + stay safe. Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2022 12:14:00 AM

Brian, Yes, they say the virus numbers are up again and they have increased where I live in rural south. It seems it is with us and is not going away. Thanks for your kind review. Sara