Sara Kendrick Poet Rictameter

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Lovers

lovers 

eyes lock, hands touch

as they reach for menus

moments of electric tension

conversation, drinks sipped, dessert savored 

inevitable shady scene

impugnable action

souls never part

lovers    

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Valsa George July 28, 2022 at 4:25 AM The electric shock of love passes through their whole being as hands touch and eyes lock ! Really enjoyed, dear Sara ! Sara Kendrick July 28, 2022 at 6:31 AM Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review. Even though it is illicit love it is love no doubt, or maybe just lust. I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting on my work. Sara

Jack Horne July 18, 2022 at 12:06 PM love this romantic write Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 1:23 PM Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar July 18, 2022 at 1:20 AM Stupendous poem, Sara. Romance is never far away. Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 5:02 AM An illicit affair is never far away most of the time as well. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Brian Sambourne July 17, 2022 at 8:56 PM Food + drink, eyes locked, hands touched - all bridges to romance. Enjoyed your posting + its tribute to love. Be well + stay safe. Brian Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 12:14 AM Brian, Yes, they say the virus numbers are up again and they have increased where I live in rural south. It seems it is with us and is not going away. Thanks for your kind review. Sara

Gershon Wolf July 17, 2022 at 8:46 PM Downright delightful, Sara. A magical marvel of a write. Sigh. :) gw Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 12:10 AM Gershon, I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Rico Leffanta July 17, 2022 at 6:56 PM sans cellphones . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha! Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 12:05 AM Yes, Rico. I am sure those cell phones were off and put away. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu July 17, 2022 at 3:11 PM Hello Sara Kendrick, yes I believe this to be true. When two people are in love. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu July 18, 2022 at 10:38 AM Hello Sara, yes it is sad when that happens. Hugs. Sara Kendrick July 18, 2022 at 12:02 AM Darlene, Yes, sometimes the wrong two are in love. Sad when it is like that. Thanks for your visit. Sara