Lover

Lover Sensual, sultry Kissing, touching, tasting Bodies, lips, teeth, claws Snarling, ripping, tearing Sharp, vicious Enemy “ A poem in diamanté form” written ~06/05/2015~

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/28/2015 1:29:00 AM

Shane, Many of us who have lived long enough have experienced the ups and downs of love. Your poem brilliantly flows from joy into sorrow. A great realistic glimpse of life. The photos depicted enhance your poem as well.

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/27/2015 11:16:00 AM

Your word choices dramatically define the feelings you wish to capture and convey. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2015 5:07:00 AM

- A beautiful diamond, Shane! - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/21/2015 5:11:00 AM

Thais Anne-Lise, Stay safe sweet lady Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/14/2015 10:09:00 PM

I loved this one, Shane....Of course...love the Lover side....Yes, sometimes things just go crazy and love sours. Good write....Good to see you write. Hugs

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/14/2015 10:38:00 PM

Hi little dolphin, I guessed which half would take your fancy. Sometimes maybe it does sour, i never used to think so but now i am not so sure. Thank you for visiting my poetry it means a lot to me. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 6:12:00 AM

Brilliantly penned diamante - from one extreme to another love to hate:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 5/14/2015 6:25:00 AM

Thank you Jan, I am sorry i have not been around much lately, i have been a bit lost. I really do appreciate your visiting my poems. I hope you and yours are well. Stay safe little Ninja Naj. Love Shane xxx