Lover


Lover
Sensual, sultry
Kissing, touching, tasting
Bodies, lips, teeth, claws
Snarling, ripping, tearing
Sharp, vicious
Enemy
“ A poem in diamanté form”
written ~06/05/2015~

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Michelle Mac Donald

July 19, 2025 at 2:03 PM

Ouch! Sort of sounds like a wolverine , come up to my den? II often wonder how you are doing , if all goes well with the magnificent you! Wishing you the best, Mikki

Connie Marcum Wong

May 28, 2015 at 1:29 AM

Shane, Many of us who have lived long enough have experienced the ups and downs of love. Your poem brilliantly flows from joy into sorrow. A great realistic glimpse of life. The photos depicted enhance your poem as well.

Emile Pinet

May 27, 2015 at 11:16 AM

Your word choices dramatically define the feelings you wish to capture and convey. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 21, 2015 at 5:07 AM

- A beautiful diamond, Shane! - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper

May 21, 2015 at 5:11 AM

Thais Anne-Lise, Stay safe sweet lady Love Shane xxx

Eileen Manassian

May 14, 2015 at 10:09 PM

I loved this one, Shane....Of course...love the Lover side....Yes, sometimes things just go crazy and love sours. Good write....Good to see you write. Hugs

Shane Cooper

May 14, 2015 at 10:38 PM

Hi little dolphin, I guessed which half would take your fancy. Sometimes maybe it does sour, i never used to think so but now i am not so sure. Thank you for visiting my poetry it means a lot to me. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

May 14, 2015 at 6:12 AM

Brilliantly penned diamante - from one extreme to another love to hate:-( Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Shane Cooper

May 14, 2015 at 6:25 AM

Thank you Jan, I am sorry i have not been around much lately, i have been a bit lost. I really do appreciate your visiting my poems. I hope you and yours are well. Stay safe little Ninja Naj. Love Shane xxx

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