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Lovely Things For Darren

Lovely little songbird looking in my window smiles in your eyes warm thoughts flowing with marmalade skies Pretty little songbird singing subdued kisses come make me whole be my one and only peek into my soul Time ticking on the wall starlit strummed melody daydream dancing again float alone in ecstasy along with my gifted pen Night time serenade lift me up with the starshine sprinkle tiny gifts of glee love spread so sweetly come drift away with me

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/2/2017 7:49:00 AM

This is absolutely gorgeous. Wow, to be serenaded in this manner . . . no wonder he loved it :) Amitiés

Maria Williams

Date: 6/1/2017 2:37:00 AM

This is a wonderful poem for Darren, Tim. You can see he's over the moon by it. So good to see...... Maria

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2017 3:24:00 PM

This poem is so very nice Tim :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/31/2017 1:29:00 PM

ohh, you charm, tim.. hope this can be turned into a song.. it is!,,huggs

White Wolf

Date: 5/31/2017 9:52:00 AM

A very touching piece, Tim! You are a true wizard with words my friend!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/31/2017 9:08:00 AM

You do lovely with style.

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/30/2017 9:41:00 PM

This is great Tim, and what a lovely gift to a friend ! Well done:)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/30/2017 9:01:00 PM

I Just listened to the song, you couldn't have picked a better accompaniment to the poem!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/30/2017 8:51:00 PM

I am left with no choice, other than to give this A7, a ten, a 100 out of 100, a 100%, a gold medal, and whatever other accolades one can think of! Such kindness of heart, refreshing, and joyous.

Dean Wood

Date: 5/30/2017 5:44:00 PM

Very nice Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/30/2017 3:44:00 PM

Darren loved it and so did I ..Such a sweet song poem Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/30/2017 3:50:00 PM

Thanks Charma. When I listened to the song I thought of him and the birds watching him. : ))

Sara Ella

Date: 5/30/2017 1:19:00 PM

This is so lovely Tim <3 Beautiful for Darren and nice that we get to read too! :)

Sara Ella
Date: 5/30/2017 5:53:00 PM

Might I add that the song is wonderful-I have been humming it all afternoon <3

Tim Smith
Date: 5/30/2017 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Sara...he is a great friend

Chris Green

Date: 5/30/2017 12:14:00 PM

This was really nice Tim. I was going to say Darren will love it but I can see he has already told you that. :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/30/2017 3:47:00 PM

He told me about the birds on his windowsill

Darren White

Date: 5/30/2017 11:48:00 AM

Awwww! This is so lovely, thank you my friend! <3 From me and the little birds outside :) Now you made me laugh and cry the same time. The song fits so well with it, I absolutely love it all. A fave!

Darren White
Date: 5/31/2017 12:10:00 AM

I did, they thank you :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/30/2017 11:55:00 AM

Tell them hello from me : )