Tim Smith Poet Light Verse

Lovely Things For Darren

Lovely little songbird
   looking in my window
   smiles in your eyes
   warm thoughts flowing
   with marmalade skies

Pretty little songbird
    singing subdued kisses
    come make me whole
    be my one and only
    peek into my soul

Time ticking on the wall
    starlit strummed melody
    daydream dancing again
    float alone in ecstasy 
    along with my gifted pen

Night time serenade
    lift me up with the starshine
    sprinkle tiny gifts of glee
    love spread so sweetly
    come drift away with me

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Anne-Marie Coreggia June 2, 2017 at 7:49 AM This is absolutely gorgeous. Wow, to be serenaded in this manner . . . no wonder he loved it :) Amitiés

Maria Williams June 1, 2017 at 2:37 AM This is a wonderful poem for Darren, Tim. You can see he's over the moon by it. So good to see...... Maria

Heidi Sands May 31, 2017 at 3:24 PM This poem is so very nice Tim :)

Nette Onclaud May 31, 2017 at 1:29 PM ohh, you charm, tim.. hope this can be turned into a song.. it is!,,huggs

White Wolf May 31, 2017 at 9:52 AM A very touching piece, Tim! You are a true wizard with words my friend!

Richard Lamoureux May 31, 2017 at 9:08 AM You do lovely with style.

Lenna Walker May 30, 2017 at 9:41 PM This is great Tim, and what a lovely gift to a friend ! Well done:)

Arthur Vaso May 30, 2017 at 9:01 PM I Just listened to the song, you couldn't have picked a better accompaniment to the poem!

Arthur Vaso May 30, 2017 at 8:51 PM I am left with no choice, other than to give this A7, a ten, a 100 out of 100, a 100%, a gold medal, and whatever other accolades one can think of! Such kindness of heart, refreshing, and joyous.

Dean Wood May 30, 2017 at 5:44 PM Very nice Tim.

Charmaine Chircop May 30, 2017 at 3:44 PM Darren loved it and so did I ..Such a sweet song poem Tim. Tim Smith May 30, 2017 at 3:50 PM Thanks Charma. When I listened to the song I thought of him and the birds watching him. : ))

Sara Ella May 30, 2017 at 1:19 PM This is so lovely Tim <3 Beautiful for Darren and nice that we get to read too! :) Sara Ella May 30, 2017 at 5:53 PM Might I add that the song is wonderful-I have been humming it all afternoon <3 Tim Smith May 30, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thanks Sara...he is a great friend

Chris Green May 30, 2017 at 12:14 PM This was really nice Tim. I was going to say Darren will love it but I can see he has already told you that. :) Tim Smith May 30, 2017 at 3:47 PM He told me about the birds on his windowsill

Darren White May 30, 2017 at 11:48 AM Awwww! This is so lovely, thank you my friend! <3 From me and the little birds outside :) Now you made me laugh and cry the same time. The song fits so well with it, I absolutely love it all. A fave! Darren White May 31, 2017 at 12:10 AM I did, they thank you :) Tim Smith May 30, 2017 at 11:55 AM Tell them hello from me : )