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Lovely Lotus

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Dodoitsu Contest Sponsor: Ink Empress 10/20/23

Lovely lotus, white and pure Your beauty I must proclaim Perfect petals of your bloom Sweet heavenly scent Symbol of serenity, spiritual ascension, majesty, knowledge and faith Delicate flower Float on lakes or murky ponds a sacred bond with nature Representing a rebirth Exquisite flora

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2023 6:02:00 AM

A lovely song indeed! Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 3:38:00 AM

Dear Lin Lane, I absolutely love this dodoitsu, how delicately youve woven words and described in such a detailed manner showing us through your lines floating lotus, symbol of serenity, in sheer eloquence, impeccable write! Such exquisite lines throughout, and beautiful imagery, i also love how you’ve defined them as pure perfect petals of nature that deserves more attention for not just their heavenly scent but for the reasons mentioned here! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/20/2023 3:38:00 PM

Very lovely!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 6:30:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, AA.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/20/2023 3:02:00 PM

your poem is as exquisite as your last line. Your poem gently touched my soul perhaps because I needed something delicate, light, and serene today. Am faving this one. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 6:20:00 PM

I’m so delighted to have filled a need for you today, Sara. Thanks for enjoying it and for the fave.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2023 1:49:00 PM

What a "Lovely Lotus" write/pretty peaceful picture. Have a peaceful weekend...................

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, Paula and I wish the same for you.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/20/2023 5:08:00 AM

I like how this looks on the page Lin. Thanks

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 5:39:00 AM

Thanks very much, Jeff. A stage setting to showcase the lotus.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/20/2023 5:00:00 AM

Your poetry, Lin, is genius and makes me happy. Your portrayal of nature's resiliency is stunning. As a soft breeze caressed my spirit, I enjoyed reading it this morning. Your words evoke the hues of a spring meadow after a hard winter, capturing nature's victory. Oh, the second stanza touches my heart! Your dedication to the splendor of nature is an artwork.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 5:38:00 AM

Lasaad, your comments are more poetic than my verses, even when about a beautiful lotus flower. Thank you!

Mike Gentile

Date: 10/20/2023 4:33:00 AM

Lin, your tribute to nature's triumph is simply beautiful! I especially love the line " a sacred bond with nature" Happy Friday xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2023 4:36:00 AM

Good morning, Mike and thanks for pointing out the line you liked best. Happy Friday and weekend to you. xoxo