Lovely Lotus

Lovely lotus, white and pure
Your beauty I must proclaim
Perfect petals of your bloom
Sweet heavenly scent

Symbol of serenity,
spiritual ascension,
majesty, knowledge and faith
Delicate flower

Float on lakes or murky ponds
a sacred bond with nature
Representing a rebirth
Exquisite flora

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Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2023 at 6:02 AM

A lovely song indeed! Congratulations!

Ink Empress

October 24, 2023 at 3:38 AM

Dear Lin Lane, I absolutely love this dodoitsu, how delicately youve woven words and described in such a detailed manner showing us through your lines floating lotus, symbol of serenity, in sheer eloquence, impeccable write! Such exquisite lines throughout, and beautiful imagery, i also love how you’ve defined them as pure perfect petals of nature that deserves more attention for not just their heavenly scent but for the reasons mentioned here! Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS on winning

Abdullah Alhemaidy

October 20, 2023 at 3:38 PM

Very lovely!

Lin Lane

October 20, 2023 at 6:30 PM

Thanks a bunch, AA.

Paula Goldsmith

October 20, 2023 at 1:49 PM

What a "Lovely Lotus" write/pretty peaceful picture. Have a peaceful weekend...................

Lin Lane

October 20, 2023 at 1:55 PM

Thank you, Paula and I wish the same for you.

Jeff Connelly

October 20, 2023 at 5:08 AM

I like how this looks on the page Lin. Thanks

Lin Lane

October 20, 2023 at 5:39 AM

Thanks very much, Jeff. A stage setting to showcase the lotus.

Sotto Poet

October 20, 2023 at 5:00 AM

Your poetry, Lin, is genius and makes me happy. Your portrayal of nature's resiliency is stunning. As a soft breeze caressed my spirit, I enjoyed reading it this morning. Your words evoke the hues of a spring meadow after a hard winter, capturing nature's victory. Oh, the second stanza touches my heart! Your dedication to the splendor of nature is an artwork.

Lin Lane

October 20, 2023 at 5:38 AM

Lasaad, your comments are more poetic than my verses, even when about a beautiful lotus flower. Thank you!