Lovely Ladies

Lovely little ladies in frocks of colors bright; tulips swaying in gentle breeze, delight
6/4/15 For Sara Kendrick's Cinquain contest
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Martin Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 11:26 AM
lovely!!!! Thank you for your comments on my poetry.
Merryman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Thomas, and you are welcome.
La France Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Kim, this is really lovely and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Constance and you are welcome!
Callus Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 11:15 AM
You paint a most delightful picture, Kim! Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Sara loves the flower poems I see. I do too. Congrats for this win.
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Thank you, Andrea! So glad you liked it!
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Kim, Congratulations........ SKAT
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June 13, 2015 at 8:14 PM
Thank you, Skat!
A   Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 1:56 PM
Kim, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Reminded me of Easter's past..Congrats on your winning contest entry..Thanks for your participaton.Sara
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Sara, for my placement in your contest!
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 9:57 AM
absolutely delightful Kim congrats! Hugs Jan xx
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June 13, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Jan!
M.N.I.W Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations. Nice poem
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, Lyric Man!
Ward Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 1:31 AM
A pretty poem. Well done for your win.
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Thank you, Julia!
Konos Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 8:43 PM
Congratulations ...How do you come up with such crisp spring thoughts....
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:54 PM
Thanks, Judy! They just pop into my head.
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Very lovely, Kim! I will think of your poem whenever I see Tulips! Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Thank you, Sandra! What a sweet thing to say!
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 10:53 PM
this is a wonderful little cinquain!!
Merryman Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm glad you like it!
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 3:28 PM
- So sweet and lovely, Kim - Luck in contest! - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Onclaud Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 5:43 AM
how picturesque, kim... it's summer here and i can relate to this charming work.. thanks to for making m epart of your clerihew challenge.. huggs
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:27 PM
So glad you liked it, Nette! Thank you!
Y. Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 11:34 PM
Kim this is so beautiful! You have skillfully penned an awesome piece . Your few words spoke loud and clear. Outstanding job:) Alexis
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Thank you for such encouraging words, Alexis!
Robertson Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 7:31 PM
I don't know what form of poetry this is, but I think it's beautiful, Short and lovely. In the contest and in life may The Good Lord be with you and bring you through.
Merryman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Milton, this is a cinquain. Thank you for your encouraging comments, and may God bless you also.
Lawless Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:08 AM
A gentle twist of the Cinquain's twist. Very nice, good luck in the contest
Merryman Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thank you, John! Appreciate you stopping by!
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