Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Lovely In Pink

A newborn’s toes wiggle like candy pink
Curled by rose petals, more fresh than morn’s scent
Flinging those buds, I trace her blossoms.

Pastel from the wink of sunlight’s blossoms
She chuckles as tiny feet gush in pink,
While the hammock billows a fruity scent.

In quick of naps,ten toes waft talcum scent
Till chuckles burst forth from jiggling blossoms,
My grandchild, my rose; graced by daytime's pink.

Lovely pink charmer wakes scent of blossoms!


 For Kelly Deschler's Simply Beautiful #2

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Paul Callus April 28, 2015 at 12:51 PM Good to be back re-reading this cute and lovely poem, Nette! Congrats on another merited win. // Still not back on Soup, but stopping by a while to visit friends:) hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2015 at 12:06 AM Nette, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~

Nandita Das April 21, 2015 at 7:04 AM This poem is a beauty. Congratulations on your win.

Sandra Haight April 20, 2015 at 12:48 PM Very sweet, Nette, and so nicely written. Brings back memories to me of those days with grand babies! Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra

Faye Gibson April 19, 2015 at 6:49 PM I remember this one, Nette; a beautiful poem for your little pink love. Congratulations on your win.

Kelly Deschler April 19, 2015 at 6:32 PM This charming poem is so precious... Very nicely written, Nette! Congrats on the win!

Jan Allison April 19, 2015 at 6:01 PM I remember reading this before Nette - many congrats on your win in Kelly's contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A August 6, 2014 at 10:35 PM nice win...PD

Casarah Nance August 4, 2014 at 4:12 PM Grats on your win :) Hugs :) :)

Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2014 at 8:43 AM My personal favorite so far, congratulations Nette.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:53 AM Wow Nette very subtle n lovely! Congrats on huge win !

Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 7:32 AM dropping back with my congratulations Nette:-) Hugs jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A August 3, 2014 at 7:30 AM Wow, such a poem, and wonderful win. CONGRATULATIONS, On a poem well done. Pd

Charlotte Puddifoot August 3, 2014 at 4:59 AM you're in the pink with this one, nette! lovely imagery, very descriptive - congrats on your win! :)

Mohan Chutani August 3, 2014 at 4:48 AM a very pink win for the little child, Nette.

Robert Lindley August 2, 2014 at 11:23 PM Big congrats on your win!!

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2014 at 8:38 PM well, this sure was the CUTEST one of all that I have seen. GREAT pink imagery. Pretty in pink! Congrats.

Paul Callus August 2, 2014 at 3:07 PM This is so beautiful Nette! Imagery and appeal to the senses is what touched me most. Great ending line, too. Congratulations on a gold-edged win. // paul

Faye Gibson August 2, 2014 at 12:41 PM Beautiful pinkness. Congratulations on this lovely win.

James Fraser July 25, 2014 at 3:14 PM Wouldn't it be lovely, no matter the creed, that an Angel would recite your wonderful words for every newborn. Simply adorable poetry 'Princess' <*> James :)

Carrie Richards July 24, 2014 at 5:36 PM Adorable........I can't help but smile with the joy in every word of this poem! ps...a big big thank you dear Nette, for my placement in your recent contest! So fun trying a new form.....you always find a new way to challenge us as poets! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2014 at 11:48 AM Ahhh!! Delightful lines penned by a gran who definitely loves her granddaugher..You'll have to do "This Little Piggy" with her..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..It was a delight to try a new venu to write my thoughts down..Sara

Harry Horsman July 24, 2014 at 9:49 AM Somehow you always 'hit the nail on the head' your poetry speaks volumes, you are very special nette...

Anne-Lise Andresen July 24, 2014 at 6:42 AM -So cute in pink ..... real girl baby color - Lovely poem - Home sweet Home :))) - Yes, at home last night ! - Everything is fine, Nette :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak July 24, 2014 at 6:38 AM Absolutely beautiful! Oh the sweet smells of a baby, and being able to giggle just because your realize your toes wiggle. Makes me long for the times when mine were tiny.

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