Lovely God

Note: Gail's first poem written
          First grade assignment

I love God.
God gives our bread and meat.
I thank God with a nod
For God's Treat.

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Gershon Wolf

March 11, 2026 at 8:13 PM

For first grade? No kidding? This is beyond outstanding, in my opinion! Remarkable, Gail!... Now how 'bout some poems from 2nd or 3rd grade... or high school?! ~ Gershon

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:17 PM

Hi Gershon, Thanks for the compliment! Sort of embarrassing to say I didn't write anything else until high school. I guess no inspiration hit me until then. - Gail

Stephan McBride

August 12, 2013 at 8:02 PM

amen, love it to be simple which only the lord might reveal to one later in life that we might return,,,,

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:35 PM

Hello Stephan, Thank you so much for your feedback! My apologies for not responding sooner. Only 13 years behind (LOL!) Had no idea until the PoetrySoup team let me know that this was posted on the site for this week and then I saw all of the replies. - Hope all is well, Gail

Sheri Fresonke Harper

May 29, 2013 at 7:11 PM

lol, very much first grade level, Gail, you captured it very well.

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:33 PM

Hi Sheri, Only 13 years behind. Quite tardy in my reply to you and everyone else. Had no idea you and others provided valuable attention and feedback.Hope all is well in your world. - Thank you, Gail

Caribbean Seawolf

May 7, 2013 at 7:41 PM

A riming tyke! Had the apple not fallen far from the tree? SeaWolf

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:31 PM

Hello SeaWolf,I guess I'm catching up to feedback I had no idea I received. My apologies, and a big TY to you! - Hope all is well, Gail

Donna Jones

January 29, 2013 at 8:23 PM

Doesn't get more powerful than this dear friend

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:29 PM

Hi Donna, Thank you so much for your valuable feedback, and my apologies for taking all this time to reply. Had no idea of the feedback. Hope all is well in your world. - Gail

Kathryn Collins

August 26, 2012 at 8:33 AM

Shades of talent to come! love, Kathy

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:25 PM

Hello Kathy, Thank you for your valued compliment. I had no idea there were comments from 2012 and am delinquent in my thank you's. Hope all is well. - Gail

Poet Destroyer A

August 25, 2012 at 8:07 PM

Gail, wow i love your how you posted this on the soup..i have say it is very cute,,, a very nice loving treat from your first grade heart. thank you for sharing :-) always~PD

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:23 PM

Hi PD, I had no idea about any of my 2012 reviews. Sorry it took me so long to thank you and everyone else for your feedback. - Hope all is well with you. - TY, Gail

Richard Palmer

August 25, 2012 at 1:29 PM

you loved your food,lol,off to a great start Gail

Gail Debole

March 15, 2026 at 2:22 PM

Hello Richard, I definitely need to catch up. Now that I look back, I guess I did like being able to eat. LOL! Hope all is well with you and your family. - Thank you, Gail