Lovely Day

morning...
     winds sing 

          breakfast...
eggs blast

       read news...
  fruitjuice

  gargle...
giggle

office... 
don't piss
          
   boss sore?
     smile more

       deadline ...
   bent spine 

  noonwalk...
   girl talk!

            rush home...
           cars roam

 traffic....
honks peak 

     duskfall...stars call
        arm slips...netflix!

    bathtub...
        rub rub

          child's kiss...
              such bliss

   lamplight...
       good night !

cheer updayfootle

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Sara Kendrick

July 19, 2026 at 10:39 AM

Great creative footle suite. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues

July 17, 2026 at 5:29 AM

Well done, Nette! The office comment so funny. Congrats!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 15, 2026 at 1:23 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the footle contest, a pleasure to read :) - Have a lovely day, Nette :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2026 at 12:00 AM

Oh I love these , Nette. Have I seen you do footles before? A very well deserved win. Congrats

Karen Jones

July 14, 2026 at 7:14 PM

Nette congratulations on your top win in my contest! Your footle poem was engaging and I enjoyed all your favorite things especially child ‘s kiss such bliss. Have a wonderful evening! Thanks for your support!