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December.12. 2024
A Christmas Poem Old or New Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France

Lovely Christmas has Come


The naked hills are clad in snow Blurring the houses that line up in a row The wind that blows is icy chill Freezing cold is the water of the rill Trees stand stripped and bare But so much gaiety is in the air Lightings from all houses shine Sending out a radiance divine Christmas trees stand finely decorated Cribs are colorfully illuminated The day has come when Christ was born In our midst as the greatest boon He came not in glory arrayed But in a poor man’s rags clad Took birth not in a palace of gold But in a deserted manger of old Poor shepherds were the sole witness They beheld his radiant face in stillness Whole world is under his magic sway As love for all is his wondrous way Jesus came down from Heaven to Earth To offer the world its true mirth To dole out the priceless treasure of peace To see all bitterness and enmity cease. Merry ditties echo from every street Children sing Christmas carols sweet From angelic band, rises the lovely refrain- “Peace on Earth and goodwill to men" Behold his radiant face in the stillness of night Of a babe born to illumine the world in light
Nov.20. 2022
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La France Avatar
December 26, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my Christmas Poems Contest, wonderfully penned, nice image, well done, Constance
Agustin Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 3:57 AM
Congrats! Merry Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.
mysore Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 9:46 PM
Happy Christmas dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 3:41 PM
If there was a line limit, you would have to shorten this, but sorry you can't even enter it?? is it a problem with running out of time? Sometimes I try to enter a contest and the little icon keeps going in circles and times out. Finally it stopped doing that. Sometimes if you click on 'forms" you can find your poems more easily in case you are not seeing your entry when you try to enter??
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:26 PM
There has been no line limit, Andrea. It was some technical hitch. When I posted this a second time, I could enter it in the contest. Thanks sweet friend for all your kind suggestions .
Leffanta Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 11:33 AM
Enjoyed your poem but imagine it was not accepted for exceeding 20-lines? Aloha!
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:23 PM
There was no line limit ! It was some technical hitch. When I posted it a second time, the problem is resolved. Thanks Rico
McBride  Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 10:24 AM
Merry Christmas, I wonder if that's allowed now, so many have found this offensive, happy holidays is the new norm. Bless you for shinning His love through you, love the poem
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:21 PM
Thanks a lot Stephan . Yes, let Him be glorified !
Poet Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 8:29 AM
Valsa, you have written a lovely poem on the holiday season. This matches perfectly the description for the contest's subject. Magnificently decked out on the day of celebration.
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:20 PM
Thanks a lot dear poet friend . Glad you liked it. I wonder how you are able to appreciate my simple verses !
Logan Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 7:58 AM
Valsa, your lines are reverently beautiful. I hope by now you've been able to enter it in the contest.
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:18 PM
Thanks a lot Jenna. When I posted it a second time, I could enter it !
Cunningham Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 7:48 AM
You captured Christmas well in this well written verse Valsa. Try closing all your pages and click refresh or just restart your computer. Hopefully your poem will appear then. Tom
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Thanks a lot Tom for your lovely comment and your kind suggestion. My problem is resolved when I posted it a second time
May Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:45 AM
You have penned a beautiful Christmas poem Valsa, I am not sure why it wont enter, have you contacted Admin.
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Thanks a lot dear Joseph. Unfortunately I don't know how to contact the admin. Now my problem is resolved.
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 5:22 AM
A beautiful and festive poem--very apt for the contest theme, Valsa. Wonderfully adorned in celebration.
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:13 PM
Thanks a lot Vijay . Glad you liked it.
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Brilliant rhyme for Christmas, Valsa:) (nope, I have never encountered such a problem)
George Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 6:12 PM
Thanks a lot Jo. I too have experienced this difficulty for the first time.
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