Lovely

L    ovely as a beautiful rose

O   nly you control my soul.

V    enon of love is in the air 

E    verywhere is with you I want to be

L    onging for your love and time with me

Y    ou are the one for me and this is the way I want it to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ball Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 12:08 PM
Nicely done Shirley. A really good acrostic. God bless, JB
Cornwall Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Enjoyed your poems today...Patrick
Austin Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 8:30 AM
Sounds like love to me. Enjoyed. daver
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:09 AM
(Sigh)Stupendous write dear Shirley ,love is strong to those who let it in the home, of their heart and it is evident that your heart is warm and sublime. Your precious charm flowing through your pen drew a loving picture in my heart tonight. I shall dream of your love...Elliott...xoxox
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May 3, 2012 at 9:05 PM
Shirley, it is a very lovely thing when love controls all the emotions inside... it's the down fall that gets ugly. a very cute and lovely poem... I love the ending.. life should be the way we want it to be...i so agree with you.. I want to be with that special someone always.. thank you for stopping by my work..always...PD
Grisetti Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 3:31 PM
A touching acrostic poem very romantic.
Goller Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 4:31 PM
A very lovely poem with an romantic touch,Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
Horne Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 1:30 PM
beautiful and lovely, shirley
Mjelde Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:30 AM
Nice piece! Laila ;0)
Freeman Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Lovely acrostic Shirley. Thanks for your recent visit. Agape, Moses
Mohammed Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:01 PM
It's soft and flowing... Left me smiling...Diana
Sweetheart Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 9:18 AM
so nice to hear from u Shirley.. again enjoyed the loveliness of this lovely write .. happy weekendf luv..
Fields Avatar
April 7, 2012 at 9:52 PM
I am smiling, This poem is very candy sweet.
Horne Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 10:56 AM
lovely indeed, my friend
May Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 9:40 PM
lovely write Shirley...always.... Joseph
Gresham Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 1:24 PM
very insightful reading, thanks for posting
Minardi Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 9:47 AM
I love the second line. :) Thanks for stopping by, Shirley.
Lu Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:35 PM
excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)
Butterfly Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Shirly, I really like your acrostic and lovely it is.
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Very nicely done Acrostic. Filled with lots of emotion. Good job Shirley.
Dey Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:15 AM
Very nice and lovely way to describe the loveliest.
Eastman Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 11:25 AM
This one flowed and worked out perfectly.
Rozario Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 1:36 PM
oh this is awesome...really. Lovely words you've penned...keep on writin'!!!...:)
Stinson Avatar
March 20, 2012 at 5:42 PM
What a wonderful acrostic poem, with such beautiful words.
Northeast Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 1:29 AM
This truly lovely- a song of love, Brenda : )
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