Lovelorn Ghost

I left my human body to ascend
And meet my maker and finally rest
But felt alone and without a friend
The divine God with his kindness blessed
And sent my lovelorn ghost back to its nest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Great to see you at the top once more Tahera. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored second place. Agape, Moses
White Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Good descriptions, I had a nde some time back- congrats to you.
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 3:42 AM
Many congrats Tahera for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Lovelorn Ghost .....interesting. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 5:58 PM
This one was wonderful the second time around too. Congratulations on your win with the Lovelorn Ghost!
George   Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 5:28 PM
Just wonderful, Tahera. Many congratulations on your SENSATIONAL WIN!!!! Well done!. Love, Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Congrats Tahera on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest.. amazing entry my friend.. happy to be sharing second place with such a talented lady ..luv..enjoy..
Kendrick Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 3:24 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Guzzi Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 2:39 PM
So much to think on, native american's [some] feel there is the spirit & the soul, spirit which is of mind stays as ghost if it wants! Soul can still stay with him ;) Good idea aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Phookan Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Super Congrats Tahera on your 2nd place win in the contest with this beautiful work.Excellent, wish life was really two way,then so many things would be simplified:) Love,Gautami
Mehta Avatar
April 15, 2011 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Tahera
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 10:36 PM
THis is wonderful little quintain, Tahera. I sure hope I can come up with one by morning, or I am gonna miss out! Good luck, dear. Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:03 PM
Quite a provocative poem, Tahera. The lovelorn ghost wants to return after being admitted to heaven. Very thought provoking entry for Dr. Ram's contest. Always wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Ruebel Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Hello Tahera, Wonderful write my dear, I enjoyed this very much today...... Much love, Shar
Poet Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Wonderful write,Tahera!I appreciate your imagination---kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 8:15 AM
a stirring write that blesses my soul, tahera... winning wishes to you! :) huggs
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry Tahera. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Very creative...well done. BG
Neels Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Tahera, I enjoyed your approach to the contest.. Wishing you all the best for the contest as well.. :) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Thanks for the entry, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Sweet and touching write Tahera my friend.. luv your title .. a winner for sure luv.. good luck in the contest...with this wonderful entry..
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