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Lovelorn Ghost

I left my human body to ascend And meet my maker and finally rest But felt alone and without a friend The divine God with his kindness blessed And sent my lovelorn ghost back to its nest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:00:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/16/2011 5:41:00 PM

Great to see you at the top once more Tahera. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored second place. Agape, Moses

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2011 7:28:00 AM

Good descriptions, I had a nde some time back- congrats to you.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/16/2011 3:42:00 AM

Many congrats Tahera for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Lovelorn Ghost .....interesting. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2011 5:58:00 PM

This one was wonderful the second time around too. Congratulations on your win with the Lovelorn Ghost!

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 5:28:00 PM

Just wonderful, Tahera. Many congratulations on your SENSATIONAL WIN!!!! Well done!. Love, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2011 4:05:00 PM

Congrats Tahera on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest.. amazing entry my friend.. happy to be sharing second place with such a talented lady ..luv..enjoy..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2011 3:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/15/2011 2:39:00 PM

So much to think on, native american's [some] feel there is the spirit & the soul, spirit which is of mind stays as ghost if it wants! Soul can still stay with him ;) Good idea aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & love

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/15/2011 11:56:00 AM

Super Congrats Tahera on your 2nd place win in the contest with this beautiful work.Excellent, wish life was really two way,then so many things would be simplified:) Love,Gautami

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2011 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on the second place win in my contest, Tahera

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2011 10:36:00 PM

THis is wonderful little quintain, Tahera. I sure hope I can come up with one by morning, or I am gonna miss out! Good luck, dear. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/5/2011 9:03:00 PM

Quite a provocative poem, Tahera. The lovelorn ghost wants to return after being admitted to heaven. Very thought provoking entry for Dr. Ram's contest. Always wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 4/5/2011 1:52:00 PM

Hello Tahera, Wonderful write my dear, I enjoyed this very much today...... Much love, Shar

Kash Poet

Date: 4/5/2011 8:51:00 AM

Wonderful write,Tahera!I appreciate your imagination---kashinath

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/5/2011 8:15:00 AM

a stirring write that blesses my soul, tahera... winning wishes to you! :) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/5/2011 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry Tahera. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. The best to you in the contest and always. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/5/2011 6:24:00 AM

Very creative...well done. BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/5/2011 6:21:00 AM

Tahera, I enjoyed your approach to the contest.. Wishing you all the best for the contest as well.. :) Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/5/2011 6:06:00 AM

Thanks for the entry, Tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2011 4:21:00 AM

Sweet and touching write Tahera my friend.. luv your title .. a winner for sure luv.. good luck in the contest...with this wonderful entry..